10.12日托福寫作·考情分析| 命中衝刺團原題！

10月12日托福·考題分析.以下思路和範文僅(jin) 供同學們(men) 學習(xi) ·參考。

綜合寫(xie) 作回憶

重新引入狼

1.恢複生態平衡，

2.不會(hui) 造成經濟損失，

3.對人危害沒那麽(me) 大

@165期 青; 168期J;162期A歡迎同學們(men) 在下方留言區補充~

學術寫(xie) 作分析

Doctor Achebe:

一個(ge) 人應該盡可能多地交朋友(large group，but not deeper)

or

專(zhuan) 注於(yu) 和一小群人維持深度關(guan) 係

同學一:

小group好，因為(wei) 可以和信任的人討論challenging是問題，這個(ge) 是valuable的

同學二:

略

審題注意點

(1)這道題應該重複了23.11.15日的考試原題。

Let's explore the dynamics of social interactions and their impact on our well-being. Socializing in smaller groups versus larger circles can have varying effects on one's health and happiness. Some argue that smaller groups foster deeper connections, allowing for more meaningful interactions and a sense of closeness. Conversely, larger friend circles offer diversity and exposure to different perspectives. Which do you think contributes more to a person's health and happiness: spending time with a close-knit few or a larger group of friends?今天的題目跟這道題很相似，應該略有改動。這也命中了老師在10月5日推出的 考前衝(chong) 刺團 中的原題。

團員考後反饋

同學2

(2).這是到朋友類話題。屬於(yu) 托福小話題，在改革後考得比較少。但是每年還是會(hui) 有幾率重複。大家不要掉以輕心。

(2)選擇哪一種朋友？主要還是對比這2種朋友的好處。如果題目問的是：prefer? than.. 建議在文段中進行對比。

(3). “more friends”:好處1: 開闊視野. 因為(wei) 交往的朋友多，所以興(xing) 趣愛好，教育背景等會(hui) 非常不一樣。能給我提供很多不同的信息，開闊視野。好處2：有助於(yu) 我的事業(ye) 發展。比如有同行的前輩，能給我提供更好的工作機會(hui) 等。

(4). "asmall group of close friends"

好處1：能夠真心理解和幫助我。當我需要幫忙的時候，不管是在工作還是學業(ye) 上，他們(men) 會(hui) 真心地提供幫助，也不會(hui) 求回報。

好處2：會(hui) 很放鬆。不用擔心他們(men) 會(hui) judge 我。跟他們(men) 在一起展現真實的自我。

參考範文：

I prefer having a small group of close friends, mainly because they provide unconditional trust and support, qualities seldom found in casual acquaintances.Life inevitably presents various challenges,from academic struggles to work-life balance issues. In such times, close friends often become our primary support system.

Unlike newer friends who might hesitate to offer help, close friends typically prioritize our needs.For instance,they willingly assist with complex problems, care for our children when we're delayed at work, and share valuable advice based on their experiences.

[對比]Whilea broader social circle can broaden our perspectives, offering insights from diverse backgrounds,this advantage often pales compared to the profound support and understanding offered by close friends.These intimate connections, forged through shared experiences and interests, provide a unique depth of companionship that is crucial during life's challenges.

Therefore,despite the benefits of a wider network, the irreplaceable support of a few close friendsholds greater value for me, making a small, tight-knit group of friends my preferred choice.（167字）