2022年6月4日托福作文考題分析

6月4日的托福作文考題

Because the world today is just so busy and crowded, we should not expect people to be polite to one another. 

當今社會(hui) 紛紛擾擾 是否應該做到 ‘ 講文明 樹新風 懂禮貌’?

這道考題,看起來很有時代氣息. 而西方文化中的 be polite 是不是局限在 對行為(wei) 規範的禮貌?

該怎麽(me) 寫(xie) 呢？

很多時候, from western culture, we also regard ‘ be polite’ as being conformed to authority. What is to conform with the authority?

It is to follow the mainstream. To listen to the authority’s views, to agree with the church, and to allow the so called ‘ leaders’ to give out orders 也是一種 ‘be polite’.  所以, 當我們(men) 要表達not being polite 的時候, 可以寫(xie) 到的論述點很多.

比如, 哥白尼, 提出的日心說, 而不是服從(cong) 教會(hui) 之前的地心說.

比如, rosa park 掀起的女權運動, 而不是給白人讓座.

比如, 呼籲公平的工作機會(hui) , 男女平等. 都是對those who are in the authority 的一種 impolite.

其他角度

當然, 同樣, 我們(men) 可以論述到, 在課堂中, 同學們(men) 和教授之間需要保持友好溝通.  商人之間的洽談需要有效而有禮儀(yi) , 以及醫患關(guan) 係的和睦發展.

1. Students and professors are effectively communicate with each other in order to promote thinking and project conduction.

2. Businessmen should maintain mannerism at times when they are building up social relationships with producers, manufacturers or customers.

3. Doctors and patients should maintain basic politeness to each other under any circumstances.