10.18雅思寫作再現流程圖 菠蘿的種植和加工 8分範文及語料

流程圖

The diagram below shows the process of growing and preparing pineapples and pineapple products.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features of the graph and make comparisons where relevant.

1、題目大意

下圖顯示了種植菠蘿和製作菠蘿產(chan) 品的過程。

通過選擇和報告圖表的主要特征來總結信息，並在相關(guan) 情況下進行比較。

2、高分範文示例

開始段 - 改寫(xie) 題目+趨勢描述：

The process of developing and preparing pineapples into unique products is depicted in the chart. On the whole, the steps in this whole method involve production of pineapples and the preparation of products, which eventually results in a beverage, canned food, or send-out.

主體(ti) 段-1：描述種植菠蘿的流程

In terms of structure, the first diagram shows that a solar panel consists of a box with an inlet on one side and an outlet on the other. The box is covered by a transparent glass panel, which seals it while allowing sunlight to penetrate and trap heat.

主體(ti) 段-2：描述菠蘿加工產(chan) 品的流程

The steps commence with the pineapples being picked and then cleaned in accordance with their sizes. The smallest and medium-sized pineapples are separated, and then their tops are removed and their skins are peeled. The smaller and medium-sized pineapples are sliced into smaller chunks or rings, which are then placed into an extractor to extract juice. The largest pineapples are distinguished by being essentially wax-coated and placed in cartons that are occasionally shipped abroad.

高分語料

on the whole 總的來說

undergo an ethylene treatment 接受乙烯處理

in accordance with 根據

wax-coated 塗蠟的

extractor 提取器

commence 開始

slice into smaller chunks or rings 切成更小的塊或環

shipped abroad 運往國外