11.17托福寫作考題分析| 學習課外技能

綜合寫(xie) 作回憶

綜合是fashion cloth的幾個(ge) reason

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學術寫(xie) 作分析

教授：

Ensuring that high school students get theeducation they need is challenging. Someeducators are recognizing that regular classesat school may not be enough to prepare students for careers and for life.Because of this, they recommend that all high school students be required to spend a specific number of hours learning useful skills outside school. Others think that this requirement isnot appropriate for all students. Which view do youagree with? Why?

學生一：暫缺。

學生二：不應該強製。

審題分析

1. 這是一道新題

但是話題是教育中很常見的課外技能話題。我們(men) 團裏有相關(guan) 的語料。這道題也比較常規。難度係數中等。

2. “有用技能”

根據同學們(men) 的回憶，題目並沒有列舉(ju) “skills”是什麽(me) ，隻是強調了在課程外。所以大家可以先自己定義(yi) 一下，比如：溝通技能，合作技能，時間規劃，金錢管理技能等... 這些在課堂上學不到，但是對未來發展很有用的技能。

3."所有高中生"

這是一個(ge) 絕對化表達。大家可以扣著這個(ge) 點寫(xie) 反駁：高中生時間學業(ye) 壓力很緊張，所以沒有時間和精力去額外學習(xi) 技能。並且這些技能可以在大學/學校的一些課外活動學習(xi) ，比如足球隊，辯論賽... 。其次，“在校外學習(xi) ”，就意味著有學費壓力，這對很多經濟條件不好的同學也造成了經濟壓力。因為(wei) 這些技能確實是每個(ge) 人都必備的，所以我們(men) 也可以放心大膽地寫(xie) ：所有高中生都應該學習(xi) 這些技能。因為(wei) 確實是對未來生活很重要。

參考範文:

I firmly believe that all high school students should be required to learn useful skills outside of school, as these extracurricular experiences contribute significantly to a well-rounded education. Despite educators’ best efforts, school curricula often cannot cover every essential life skill due to resource limitations and a primary focus on academic subjects. Therefore, it is crucial for students to actively pursue after-school activities that foster important skills such as financial literacy, effective communication, and physical fitness.

Consider Bill Gates.The reason why hebecame a pioneer in the computer era is that, as a high school student, he gained early exposure to computer programming through an extracurricular club. This unique opportunity, sponsored by his parents, laid the foundation for his future success as a tech innovator. Likewise, the reason why tennis star Qinwen Zheng achieved a top global ranking is that she discovered her passion and honed her athletic prowess through her school’s tennis team. This experience provided the foundation she needed to excel on the world stage.

In conclusion, since schools cannot address all of a student’s developmental needs, participating in extracurricular activities is essential for acquiring practical skills that prepare them for future success.