12.8托福寫作範文+分析| 今年第13次命中原題！

今天推送的是12月8日·托福·考題分析.以下思路和範文僅(jin) 供同學們(men) 學習(xi) ·參考。

12.8日綜合寫(xie) 作回憶

gluten 這個(ge) 東(dong) 西就是穀物類的食品中含的。

然後閱讀是說有三個(ge) 方麵，

第一個(ge) 是人胃，它不能消化這個(ge) 這個(ge) 這個(ge) 這種蛋白質。

第二個(ge) 是， 它可能會(hui) 導致胃的疼痛，還有疲勞，

第三個(ge) :導致記憶受損。

@156期 X.

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學術寫(xie) 作分析

Dr. Achebe

Today we will discuss a topic that is important for students and the public at large: namely, how to prioritize spending, given the limited funding availablefor schools. Some people think schools should spend more money on schoolteachers’ salariesbecause, if the salaries improved, more qualified people will beattracted to the profession.Others believe the money should be spent on additional resources such as books and computers. Which viewpoint do you agree with?

Kelly:

I believe that increasing teachers' salaries will improve the quality of education. If they earn more money, people will consider teaching as a viable profession rather than opting for private sector jobs. We need the brightest minds in the classrooms.

Paul:

I acknowledge that school teachers already earn a decent salary and provide high-quality education. I'm not certain how much of an impact increasing their salaries would have. Nonetheless, schools always require new equipment or facilities. Knowledge and technology are constantly evolving, and we need to prepare students with the most up-to-date materials.

審題分析

(1). 這個(ge) 題目是一個(ge) 很經典的教育類-老師和學校設備的話題。今年9月10日剛考過。因為(wei) 這個(ge) 題目太經典，所以選作為(wei) 寫(xie) 作團day4的延伸聯係題目。寫(xie) 作團day5也重點推送了關(guan) 於(yu) 教師和設備的語料。認真學習(xi) 過老師寫(xie) 作團的同學，應該寫(xie) 起來很輕鬆過了。

(2)題目含義(yi) ：

今天我們(men) 將討論一個(ge) 對學生和公眾(zhong) 都很重要的話題：在學校資金有限的情況下，如何安排開支順序。有些人認為(wei) 應該增加學校教師的薪水，因為(wei) 如果薪水提高，就會(hui) 吸引更多有資質的人才加入這個(ge) 行業(ye) 。而其他人則認為(wei) 這些資金應該用於(yu) 增加額外資源，如書(shu) 籍和電腦。你同意哪種觀點？

(3)可行的角度和思路：

1. "given the limited funding availablefor schools."從(cong) 學校角度：

學校的資金也是有限的。可以分析哪一個(ge) 選項會(hui) 給學校造成大的經濟壓力。比如，相對而言，購買(mai) 更多的書(shu) 籍, 電腦等是一筆不菲的開銷。為(wei) 了負擔這個(ge) 支出，可能會(hui) 需要提升學費、或者政府收更多的稅收來撥款… (寫(xie) 作團-政府話題思路)

2. 學生的角度：

老師對學生的影響比其他資源更大一些。因為(wei) 老師不僅(jin) 能給他們(men) 講述課本上的複雜知識，還給學生傳(chuan) 授一些重要的價(jia) 值觀。比如, 幫助一些問題少年回到正軌等(寫(xie) 作團語料/老師的功能)。這些都是其他教學資源比如書(shu) 籍做不到的。所以，老師值得更高的薪水，促使他們(men) 更加努力工作，幫助學生…

3. "more qualified people will beattracted to the profession".老師的角度：

提供工資才會(hui) 讓老師更投入工作，和吸引到有才華的人做老師。因為(wei) 現在老師工資很低，很多老師無法養(yang) 家糊口，所以很多有才華的人都不願意從(cong) 事教師的行業(ye) 。但是, 如果學校提升他們(men) 的工資。在職老師就會(hui) 認真工作；有才華的人就願意加入老師的隊伍…

4. “books and computers”設備：

好的教學設備能夠幫助學生更有效地理解知識。很多知識對學生來說都比較抽象，比如天文宇宙，物理學中的光波傳(chuan) 輸… 這些知識無論老師的闡釋多麽(me) 清晰，學生可能還是覺得難以理解。但是，如果學校購買(mai) 一些先進的設備，比如天文望遠鏡，投影儀(yi) 等… 學生就能看到… （寫(xie) 作團語料）

👩🏻‍🏫：以上思路都是比較好的思路。以上藍色詞匯都可以在寫(xie) 作團day5/day3語料中找到相關(guan) 表達。

參考範文:

I side with Kelly.I alsobelieve that schools should prioritize increasing teachers' salaries over investing in other educational resources. Teachers play a pivotal role in students' development that extends far beyond what textbooks or computers can offer. They not only convey complex knowledge but also answer students' questions on various life issues, including relationships, and even guide juvenile delinquents onto the right track.However, despite their significance, teachers often find themselves underpaid. The average annual income for a teacher is approximately ten thousand dollars, roughly equivalent to that of a construction worker. Consequently, many educators are forced to take on part-time jobs or private tutoring sessions just to make ends meet, compromising their availability to students in need.If schools were to increase their salaries, teachers would be more willing and able to go the extra mile for their students. This could include staying after school to address individual questions or tailoring lesson plans to better cater to diverse learning needs. Therefore, if the aim is to foster a more effective educational environment, schools would be wise to focus on adequately compensating their teaching staff.