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Many people think modern communication technology is having some negative effects on social relationships. Do you agree or disagree?

題目解讀

本題是議論文討論一個(ge) 觀點的題型，分析現代通信技術對社會(hui) 關(guan) 係產(chan) 生的負麵影響。文章采用了有側(ce) 重的文章結構，承認了科技進步不可否認地在許多方麵改善了溝通，但重點論證了它可能會(hui) 破壞人際關(guan) 係的質量和深度。

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In recent years, there has been growing concern that modern communication technology, such as smartphoness, social media, and messaging apps, is negatively affecting social relationships. While these advancements have undeniably improved communication in many ways, I strongly believe that they also pose significant challenges that can undermine the quality and depth of human connections.

Modern communication tools have revolutionized how people interact, making it easier to stay in touch with friends and family across the globe. Social media platforms and instant messaging services allow individuals to share life updates, express emotions, and offer support, which has strengthened many relationships, particularly for those who are geographically separated.

Furthermore, these technologies can provide individuals with a sense of belonging, as online communities often offer a space for people with similar interests or experiences to connect.However, despite these positive aspects, there is mounting evidence to suggest that excessive reliance on digital communication can erode the quality of our social relationships. One major concern is the rise of superficial connections.

While it is easier than ever to connect with large numbers of people online, these interactions often lack the depth and emotional richness of face-to-face conversations. For instance, people may accumulate hundreds of friends or followers on social media, but these relationships are often transactional and fleeting, lacking true intimacy.

Additionally, the constant use of digital devices can interfere with in-person interactions.

Many individuals find themselves distracted by their smartphoness during social gatherings, leading to fragmented attention and a decline in meaningful, uninterrupted conversations.

Moreover, excessive screen time can contribute to feelings of loneliness and social isolation, as individuals may prioritize online interactions over face-to-face engagements, ultimately weakening the bonds they share with those around them.

In conclusion, although modern communication technology offers undeniable convenience and connectivity, it can have negative repercussions on the quality of social relationships.

To mitigate these effects, it is crucial for individuals to strike a balance, using technology to enhance relationships without allowing it to replace the depth and authenticity of in-person connections.

重點詞匯/語料

there has been growing concern that人們(men) 越來越擔心

smartphoness, social media, and messaging apps智能手機、社交媒體(ti) 和即時通訊應用

pose significant challenges提出重大挑戰

undermine the quality and depth of human connections破壞人際關(guan) 係的質量和深度

modern communication tools現代通訊工具

revolutionize how people interact徹底改變人們(men) 的互動方式

stay in touch with friends and family across the globe與(yu) 世界各地的朋友和家人保持聯係

social media platforms and instant messaging services社交媒體(ti) 平台和即時通訊服務

share life updates, express emotions, and offer support分享生活更新，表達情感，並提供支持

strengthen many relationships加強多種關(guan) 係

geographically separated地理上的分離

a sense of belonging歸屬感

a space for people with similar interests or experiences to connect一個(ge) 讓有相似興(xing) 趣或經曆的人聯係的空間

there is mounting evidence to suggest that越來越多的證據表明

excessive reliance on digital communication過度依賴數字通信

erode the quality of our social relationships侵蝕我們(men) 社會(hui) 關(guan) 係的質量

the rise of superficial connections膚淺聯係的增加

lack the depth and emotional richness of face-to-face conversations缺乏麵對麵交談的深度和情感的豐(feng) 富

transactional and fleeting交易性質的，轉瞬即逝的

lack true intimacy缺乏真正的親(qin) 密

constant use of digital devices持續使用數碼設備

interfere with in-person interactions幹擾麵對麵的交流

social gatherings社交聚會(hui) lead to fragmented attention and a decline in meaningful, uninterrupted conversations excessive screen time導致注意力分散，減少有意義(yi) 的、不間斷的對話

feelings of loneliness and social isolation感到孤獨和社會(hui) 孤立

prioritize online interactions over face-to-face engagements優(you) 先考慮在線互動而不是麵對麵的交流

weaken the bonds they share with those around them削弱他們(men) 與(yu) 周圍人之間的聯係

undeniable convenience and connectivity不可否認的便利性和連接性

have negative repercussions on the quality of social relationships對社會(hui) 關(guan) 係的質量有負麵影響嗎

mitigate these effects減輕這些影響

strike a balance達成平衡

enhance relationships加強關(guan) 係

the depth and authenticity of in-person connections人際關(guan) 係的深度和真實性