雅思大作文7分範文及解析：學生不學習科學課程

報告類大作文，教育類話題

Not enough students choose science subjects in many countries. What are the reasons for this problem? What are the effects on society?

題目來源：2016年5月19日亞(ya) 太雅思大作文

1、題目大意

在許多國家，沒有足夠的學生選擇科學科目。原因是什麽(me) ？它對於(yu) 社會(hui) 有什麽(me) 影響？

2、思路解析

這是一道報告類大作文，聊得學生不願意學習(xi) 科學課程的原因和影響。報告類的題目結構比較簡單，兩(liang) 個(ge) 主體(ti) 段分別回應兩(liang) 個(ge) 問題，主體(ti) 段一分析原因，主體(ti) 段二分析影響。審題時候注意限定對象“on society”，即我們(men) 討論影響時隻考慮對社會(hui) 的影響，不用考慮個(ge) 人等情況，否則會(hui) 產(chan) 生偏題。下麵月半鴨和大家一起來看下具體(ti) 觀點。

首先來看原因，有兩(liang) 方麵。

一是科學相關(guan) 課程難度較大令很多同學望而卻步。學生不僅(jin) 需要掌握複雜的理論知識體(ti) 係和演算能力，還需要進行繁瑣重複的實驗，並且在這過程中可能會(hui) 不斷麵臨(lin) 失敗。

二是讀完科學課程後，就業(ye) 前景可能會(hui) 受到限製。一方麵學生很難在社會(hui) 上找到匹配自己專(zhuan) 業(ye) 方向的就業(ye) 崗位，另一方麵大多數科研人員的工資可能並不如其他工作，比如金融、計算機等，這會(hui) 讓人覺得性價(jia) 比過低，不願意選擇科學課程。

然後來看對社會(hui) 的影響。

科學對於(yu) 一個(ge) 社會(hui) 或國家的發展非常重要，科學技術的發展能夠推動社會(hui) 進步。而想要科學領域能夠發展，勢必需要大量的人才能夠投入相關(guan) 領域中。但願意學習(xi) 科學課程的學生減少，無疑會(hui) 降低科研人才的基數，這對於(yu) 科學研究和社會(hui) 發展是不利的。

3、提綱

4、高分範文示例

Science is not as popular of a major choice among college students as business, arts, or social sciences. I genuinely think that the complexity of these classes and the low pay are contributing factors to this occurrence.

First, the difficulty of science may frustrate students from pursuing a degree in the field. Students are discouraged from enrolling in science courses due to the sophistication of certain abstract equations and theories, as well as the length and repetition of many scientific experiments. Secondly, students are also discouraged from pursuing science degrees because the pay is inadequate. Despite having respectable jobs, scientific professionals usually earn less than their counterparts in business and other fields, because of which significant numbers of students are compelled to pursue suboptimal majors.

However, this trend poses a serious societal risk. Physic and chemistry serve as the foundation upon which modern society is built. To advance in fields such as medicine, engineering, and space science, a foundation in basic sciences is required. The dearth of scientifically talented individuals may inhibit social innovation. Even fewer qualified workers will be available in fields related to science if fewer students choose to major in science. Because we live in a knowledge-based society, it would be detrimental to the economy and the advancement of science in the long run.

In conclusion, if the trend of fewer people enrolling in programmes related to science continues, the effects on society will most certainly be detrimental. This is because the effects on society are broadly influenced by the level of scientific education.

5、相關(guan) 詞匯和語法結構

genuinely   真正的，真誠的

in the field   在……領域

have respectable jobs   有體(ti) 麵的工作

be compelled to   被迫於(yu)

dearth   缺乏、不足

in the long run   歸根結底

detrimental   有害的