9.10大陸雅思大作文7分範文及解析：購物習慣更多受年齡影響

觀點類大作文，社會(hui) 類話題

People’s shopping habits depend more on the age group they belong to than any other factors. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

題目來源：2022年9月10日大陸雅思大作文（重複2016年4月30日大陸考題）

1、題目大意

人們(men) 的購物習(xi) 慣更多與(yu) 他們(men) 的年齡有關(guan) 而不是其他因素，是否同意？

2、思路解析

這是一道觀點類大作文，討論的導致購物習(xi) 慣的因素。審題時候要注意，題目指出了一個(ge) 比較關(guan) 係：年齡對人們(men) 購物習(xi) 慣影響更大，因此我們(men) 可以對這個(ge) 邏輯關(guan) 係進行反駁，即影響購物習(xi) 慣的因素有很多，很難進行量化和比較。下麵我們(men) 來看下具體(ti) 觀點。

影響購物習(xi) 慣的因素有很多：年齡、性別、性格、文化習(xi) 慣等

年齡角度來說，年輕人會(hui) 更喜歡也更容易接受新鮮、潮流的東(dong) 西，年長的人可能會(hui) 更喜歡穩重、實用性更高的商品。

性別角度來說，男生在購物時，目的性往往更加明確，就是為(wei) 了購買(mai) 他們(men) 缺少且需要的東(dong) 西。而女生會(hui) 將購物作為(wei) 一種娛樂(le) 活動來進行，他們(men) 並不一定真的缺少什麽(me) ，而是享受購物過程中所帶來的快樂(le) ，並且他們(men) 也更傾(qing) 向與(yu) 小姐妹一起逛街。

文化角度來說，不同國家地區的人會(hui) 因為(wei) 自己的傳(chuan) 統文化而購買(mai) 一些商品，比如中國人會(hui) 購買(mai) 一套紅色的衣服在新年穿，因為(wei) 紅色代表喜慶。美國在感恩節買(mai) 火雞吃，因為(wei) 冒險者最早開拓美洲大陸時，火雞是當時非常多見也是他們(men) 賴以生存的食物之一。

諸如這樣的因素還有很多，我們(men) 會(hui) 發現很多消費行為(wei) 背後其實跟年齡真的沒有關(guan) 係，因此，武斷的認為(wei) “購物習(xi) 慣更多的和年齡相關(guan) 是不合理的”

3、提綱

4、高分範文示例

Shopping has become a national pastime in many countries and people’s buying behavior has recently received long overdue attention as a social issue.  It is seemingly evident that young people have different shopping ideas, compared with the elders as they pay more attention to enjoyment and pleasure in their shopping experience, while elder people attach more value to actual shopping results and commodity price.  Still, I believe it is arbitrary to jump to the conclusion that age imposes the major influence on people’s buying habits.

In addition to age, gender is an indispensable factor researchers cannot afford to ignore when they attempt to dig into consumer behavior.  Generally, shopping is ideally the hobby of females.  Females “love shopping”, they are naturally programmed to invest in their desires and relish happiness in return. As the study says, “Men buy for their needs and women shop for their wants”.  When shopping, females also behave in a different manner as that of males. They like their female friends to accompany them whereas males prefer shopping alone.

Furthermore, the needs, processes, and selection that the human brain goes through when making a purchase are often far more complex than the buyer might imagine.  A bunch of other factors such as personal history, cultural considerations and psychological factors need to be taken into account.  Some people buy certain brands to support their personal or professional image.  Specifically，some buy products that are either perceived as fashionable, trendy or high class or that fit into a particular subculture or peer group.   Some people make their purchase decision when tempted by product variation and price competition, as they are prone to be persuaded by those promotional strategies and tactics such as posters and banners during the sales period, advertising bursting in the radio and television, which is quite common among all age groups.

Based on these insights, there is a need to examine the phenomena in a further and more comprehensive context.  Before that, I am inclined to believe it is the interaction of these factors that shapes a person’s purchase pattern and dictates how they make buying decisions.

5、相關(guan) 詞匯和語法結構

overdue   逾期的

seemingly   貌似，表麵上

arbitrary   武斷的，隨心所欲的

relish   從(cong) ……獲得樂(le) 趣，渴望，享受

subculture   亞(ya) 文化

variation   變化，變異

tactic   策略，手段

dictate   命令，決(jue) 定