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People's shopping habits depend more on the age group they belong to than on other factors. To what extent do you agree or disagree？（22.09.10）

審題與(yu) 分析

第一步：找出題幹核心詞

shopping habitsdepend more on ageother factors

第二步：歸納題幹邏輯

這是一個(ge) 典型的 “A導致B。你是否同意？” 型題幹。即 A (age) --> B (shopping habits) 年齡影響消費習(xi) 慣。

同意：隻能寫(xie) “確實年齡對消費習(xi) 慣影響很大”。可寫(xie) 內(nei) 容不多，不推薦。

不同意：A導致B，我不同意。因為(wei) 還有其他因素C、D也能更大程度地影響消費習(xi) 慣。可寫(xie) 內(nei) 容多，推薦。

第三步：邏輯代入原題

讓步：消費習(xi) 慣確實會(hui) 受到年齡（A）一定影響。例如：年輕人追求時尚和創新的東(dong) 西，消費更衝(chong) 動，購買(mai) 力更強。隨著年齡增長，中年人的消費不得不更多轉向家庭支出，因此會(hui) 變得更節儉(jian) 持家。老人的消費觀念相對保守。 除了年齡因素，其他因素（C、D）也會(hui) 影響人們(men) 的消費行為(wei) 。

收入：高收入人群能夠消費得起高品質商品和奢侈品，低收入人群則主要購買(mai) 便宜的生活必需品。不同性別的人群也有不同的消費習(xi) 慣。

性別：比如男性購物通常比較決(jue) 斷，女性則會(hui) 花更多的時間比較價(jia) 格。

參考範文

Shopping has become a national pastime in many countries and people’s buying behavior has recently received long overdue attention as a social issue. Researches indicate that consumers in different age groups have  their own characteristics in perchasing habits. As far as I am concerned, there are other factors that influence more on people’s consumption behavior.Admittedly, age does play a role in making purchasing behavior. For young generation in their teens or twenties, they are more generous in spending money than their parents and grandparents. Most of their money is spent on stylish clothes, fancy electronic gadgets and entertainment, as youngsters pay more attention to enjoyment and pleasure in their shopping experience. By contrast, middle-aged consumers are more price-conscious, and their income is mainly allocated to household expenditure and children’s education. As people grow old, particularly after retirement, they may become conservative in consumption.Besides age, other factors also determine peoples’ shopping habits. Consumers’ financial conditions is the key one. Wealthy people tend to buy high quality goods, even luxury items, with less consideration for price. However, low-income ones can only afford daily necessities and discounted goods. Gender also matters. Males are more likely to be decisive in spending money, whereas females are good at comparing the prices of different brands before making the purchase. Generally, shopping is ideally the hobby of females, they are naturally programmed to invest in their desires and relish happiness in return.In conclusion, several factors such as age, income, gender contribute to people’s buying decisions.