劍10寫作7分範文及解析：Test4 博物館收費的利弊

利弊類大作文，文化類話題

Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

題目來源：劍10Test4大作文

1、題目大意

許多博物館收取門票，而其他博物館則是免費的。你認為(wei) 向人們(men) 收取博物館門票的好處多於(yu) 壞處嗎？

2、思路解析

這是一道利弊類大作文，聊的是博物館參觀收費的利弊。利弊類文章需要強調在論證上體(ti) 現合理性，即在具體(ti) 的分析中，明確能體(ti) 現出一邊的論述的確是大於(yu) 另一邊，或是利弊均等，而利弊是否有說服力並不取決(jue) 於(yu) 觀點的數量，而是內(nei) 容是否有說服力。審題時候注意限定觀點“charge for admission”，不需要討論博物館別的問題，否則屬於(yu) 偏題。下麵月半鴨和大家一起來看下具體(ti) 觀點。

首先來看壞處，有兩(liang) 方麵。

一是博物館收費可能會(hui) 勸退一部分遊客，人們(men) 了解當地曆史和文化的意願度變得更少。同時，博物館作為(wei) 文化傳(chuan) 播的重要部分，遊客數量下滑，意味著當地弘揚本土文化的機會(hui) 變得更少。

二是對那些免費的博物館產(chan) 生負麵影響。相較於(yu) 那些免費的博物館，收費博物館可能會(hui) 擁有更強的經濟實力並提升自己的吸引力，搶走了免費博物館的遊客，使得後者存在價(jia) 值降低。

再來看好處，有三方麵。

一是博物館收費有利於(yu) 緩解政府的財政壓力。在免費的情況下，博物館的人員成本、維護成本高度依賴於(yu) 政府支出，而通過收費可以補貼一部分支出甚至達到收支平衡。而政府節約下來的錢則可以投入其他需要的領域，比如教育和醫療。

二是博物館通過收費擁有一定資金後，不僅(jin) 可以用於(yu) 改善場館設施，還可以投入更多新的技術，比如將VR技術與(yu) 展品相結合，豐(feng) 富觀眾(zhong) 的瀏覽體(ti) 驗，提高自己的新引力。

三是博物館通過門票收費的模式可以控製參觀人數，避免免費情況下遊客過多可能產(chan) 生的問題，比如人數太多導致參觀體(ti) 驗不佳，或是防護不足導致藏品遭到損壞。

3、提綱

4、高分範文示例

While the charging policy of museums would relatively provoke the negative effects on free ones, I would strongly believe that the contributing factors are more outweighing. 

It is not surprising that the new management of some museums via charging for access undoubtedly generates benefits, since the financial burden of the government would initially be released due to the cut down of the budget in this respect, when the tolls would theoretically compensate the costs of the museums relatively. This sort of money could be utilized as, say, the salary of the staff, the maintenance of the structures and infrastructures, or even as the government profits by means of taxes. Great balances between the output and income would be witnessed. 

Besides, the charging policy would also bring about virtuous circle in terms of the development of the heritage sites and historical industries. On the one hand, the money collected would guarantee better exhibits through investing in the decorations, the content, or even in the more exciting forms: some modern technologies such as VR（virtual reality）or computing imagines or videos would be utilized on display. On the other hand, the better presentations would also appeal to more consumers who are interested in these involvements. 

Admittedly，there emerges an awareness that the charging ones would somewhat blight the management of those free museums, since they lack the ample money to make enough refurbishments, which therefore provokes a less popularity compared with the tolling counterparts. Whereas it is suggested that the competitiveness would be whittled down through differentiating the topics of exhibits between museums, to attract trips with diverse tastes. 

In a word, never can the positive effects of the commercialization of some museums be ignored, and there are reasonable ways for relieving the pressures on the free ones during the process.

5、相關(guan) 詞匯和語法結構

Financial burden  財政負擔，經濟負擔

Theoretically  理論上

Compensate  補償(chang) ; 彌補

Maintenance  維修 ; 維護

Infrastructure  基礎設施，基礎建設

Heritage site  遺址

Decoration  裝飾 ; 裝飾品

Counterpart  對應物

Whittle down  逐漸減少

Commercialization  商業(ye) 化；商品化