10.8大陸雅思大作文7分範文及解析：拆除老房子建造新建築

觀點類大作文，城市規劃類話題

Too much money is spent on looking after and repairing old buildings. Some people think we should knock old buildings down and build new modern ones. To what extent do you or disagree?

題目來源：2022年10月8日大陸雅思大作文（重複2017年12月2日大陸考題）

1、題目大意

太多的錢被花在了老房子的重修上，有些人認為(wei) 應該拆除老房子並且建新房。在多大程度上同意或不同意？

2、思路解析

這是一道觀點類大作文，聊的是城市規劃中非常經典的老房新房的問題。審題時候注意一點，題目給出的觀點不僅(jin) 提到了“拆除老建築”，還有“建造新建築”，因此在論證時兩(liang) 方麵都需要提及。下麵，月半鴨和大家一起來看下具體(ti) 觀點。

首先來看建新房子的原因，有兩(liang) 方麵

一是老房子維護和翻修確實需要投入大量成本，許多老房子年代久遠，不僅(jin) 房屋結構和外牆需要翻新維修，還可能需要增加許多配套設施（比如獨立廚衛和下水道）來滿足現代人生活，這些持續產(chan) 生的成本可能不亞(ya) 於(yu) 建造新房。

二是因為(wei) 城市人口不斷增加導致人們(men) 的住房需求更多，相比於(yu) 老房子，新房子在同樣麵積下能夠提供更多的居住空間以及居住體(ti) 驗，以滿足人們(men) 的需求。

然後來看不應該拆除老建築的原因，同樣有兩(liang) 方麵。

一是許多老建築代表著當地的曆史和文化，無論是故宮或巴黎聖母院這類宏偉(wei) 的古建築，還是四合院或石庫門這類民用的老房子，都能讓當地人更好的了解曆史文化，並從(cong) 中產(chan) 生民族自豪感。同時，這些古建築也能起到文化輸出的作用，讓其他國家地區的人們(men) 更好的了解當地文化。

二是許多老建築保存得當還能發揮經濟價(jia) 值，不少標誌性的古建築群如今都會(hui) 作為(wei) 旅遊景點對外開放，此外一些合適的老建築還會(hui) 改建為(wei) 酒店等娛樂(le) 設施。這樣做不僅(jin) 能推動旅遊業(ye) 的發展，其所產(chan) 生的經濟收益也足以覆蓋維護的成本。

3、提綱

4、高分範文示例

The current government invests heavily in the renovation of historic structures, even in contexts where they need to address pressing issues of societal daily necessity. Some claim that these structures are obsolete and ought to be demolished and replaced. I personally disagree with this position.

First, the historical value of ancient structures necessitates their preservation. The Forbidden City in China and Notre Dame Cathedral in France are, respectively, national and cultural symbols. If these ancient structures are appropriately preserved, youngsters will be able to learn about their cultural heritage and develop a stronger sense of national pride. These structures facilitate the export of culture during times of peace and normal national interactions. In addition, during times of crisis and conflict, when individuals must maintain a strong sense of patriotism and protect national interests, cultural symbols of the nation, such as architecture, are essential to the sense of national unity.

Additionally, historic buildings have both economic and historical value. One of the oldest countries in Europe, Spain has well-preserved ancient structures that contribute to its tourism industry. In addition, the Spanish government has taken a different approach to economic sustainability in the preservation of ancient buildings: the Royal Post model, in which historical and culturally significant ancient buildings that cannot be fully preserved are converted into hotels, ensuring economic growth while preserving them.

Under the pressure of exponential population growth, it is understandable to replace certain ageing structures with new ones , primarily high-rise buildings. This is as a result of the fact that modern buildings can accommodate more people without taking up excessive space, thereby reducing the burden of overcrowding. Nonetheless, there are numerous alternatives to the conventional solutions to this social issue. For instance, by constructing new buildings in the suburbs, the cost of new buildings may be more affordable than in cities.

In conclusion, due to their incomparable historical value and potential financial return, I believe it is imperative to subsidise the maintenance of historic buildings.

5、相關(guan) 詞匯和語法結構

Forbidden City故宮

Notre Dame de Paris 巴黎聖母院

Royal post station 皇家驛站

Subsidize 資助

Maintenance 維護

Indispensable 不可取代的

Irreplaceable不可替代的