雅思大作文7分範文及解析：公共場合能否用手機

雙邊類大作文，科技類話題

Some people say that mobiles phoness should not be used in public places such as buses, trains, restaurants, and cinemas. Others say that people should be able to use mobiles phoness anywhere. Discuss both views and give your own opinions.

題目來源：2015年10月4日大陸雅思大作文

1、題目大意

有些人認為(wei) 移動電話不應該在公共場所使用，比如公共汽車、火車、餐館和電影院。其他人認為(wei) 人們(men) 可以在任何地方使用手機。討論雙方觀點並給出你自己的意見。

2、思路解析

這是一道雙邊類大作文，聊的是公共場所使用移動電話的問題。雙邊類的題目，需要對每個(ge) 觀點分別表達同意或反對，最終的結論就是我的立場，可以是中立（雙方都同意或都反對），也可以是單邊支持某一方立場。審題時候注意兩(liang) 點，一是限定對象“mobiles phoness”和“public places”，觀點一定要在這兩(liang) 個(ge) 範圍中進行討論。二是絕對詞，“should not”和“anywhere”都是絕對化表達，因此兩(liang) 邊觀點都可以從(cong) 反對角度切入會(hui) 更好寫(xie) 。下麵月半鴨和大家一起來看下具體(ti) 觀點。

首先來看不應在公共場合隨意使用手機的原因，主要有兩(liang) 方麵。

一是公共場合使用手機的噪音會(hui) 打擾到其他人，無論是播放音樂(le) 還是打電話，聲音太大都會(hui) 對身邊人造成困擾，過量的噪音甚至會(hui) 讓人感到煩躁。

二是在一些公共場合比如電影院，手機發出的光亮也會(hui) 幹擾到其他人，讓他們(men) 有不好的消費體(ti) 驗。而為(wei) 了保障其他消費者的權利，商家也會(hui) 反對個(ge) 人在其中使用手機。

然後來看不應完全禁止的原因，同樣有兩(liang) 方麵。

一方麵手機作為(wei) 人們(men) 常用的娛樂(le) 手段，在乘坐公共交通時能夠用來打發時間，同時使用耳機或者調成靜音能夠有效避免發出噪音打擾到其他乘客。在不影響他人的情況下，限製人們(men) 使用手機並沒有意義(yi) 。

另一方麵手機作為(wei) 現在人們(men) 重要的溝通手段，如果遇到緊急的事情，即使在公共場合，當事人也需要聯係他人或者能被聯係上，因此應該保障人們(men) 必要時能夠使用手機的基本權利。

3、提綱

4、高分範文示例

People today are cell phones addicts and use them cosntantly. While there are those who believe that using mobiles phoness in public should be forbidden, there are others who do not share this opinion. I personally think people should be encouraged to avoid using their mobiles devices in public, but a strict ban may be upsetting.

Due to the fact that certain phones-related behaviours might be annoying, it may be desirable to limit their usage in public settings so as to establish an atmosphere that is pleasant and conducive to everyone feel at ease. A traveller who interrupts the experience of other passengers on a crowded train by shouting into their phones, playing music or TikTok videos, and speaking loudly is considered a noise generator. In places where peace and quiet are necessary for concentration, such as a movie theatre or a library, the noise from mobiles phoness can be exceedingly distracting. In addition, the light from people's phoness disturbs the people inside the theatre, which is an offence on the rights of those who are paying to watch movies and not for a miserable experience.

The use of mobiles phoness in public settings is unpleasant and offensive, yet it should not be restricted totally because it is an inconvenience to others. Texting, swiping on social media, and listening to music through earbuds make no audible sound and should, therefore, not be restricted on public transportation or in libraries. These activities assist people in passing the time and hence should not be restricted. Second, a complete ban on cell phones use would make it harder to communicate during times of emergency and should be avoided for this reason. Because calling is still the most direct and effective method of communication, it is vital that individuals have access to their phoness during emergencies.

In conclusion, it is considered impolite to use a mobiles phones in public and should be avoided. However, It is inconvenient and unnecessary to impose such stringent restrictions on the usage of mobiles devices.

5、相關(guan) 詞匯和語法結構

Be obsessed with 沉迷於(yu)

Discourage sb from doing sth 勸阻做

Veritable 名副其實的

Infringement of rights 侵犯權益

Swipe the phones 滑動手機