劍11寫作7分範文及解析：Test1 投資鐵路而非公路

觀點類大作文，交通類話題

Government should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

題目來源：劍11Test1大作文

1、題目大意

政府應該把錢花在鐵路而不是公路上。你是否同意？

2、思路解析

這是一道觀點類大作文，聊的是政府應該投資鐵路還是公路，題目是交通類中非常基礎的一道題目。審題時注意一點，需要對“鐵路”和“公路”雙方進行對比。下麵月半鴨和大家一起來看下具體(ti) 觀點。

首先來看投資鐵路而非公路的原因，有兩(liang) 方麵。

一是在遠距離旅行上，火車相較於(yu) 汽車速度更快，乘客能夠更快抵達目的地。而且長時間開車容易造成疲憊，但乘坐火車則沒有這個(ge) 擔憂，可以更加輕鬆地享受旅途上的時光。

二是從(cong) 商業(ye) 角度來看，鐵路能夠承擔更大的貨運量，一趟火車所能承載的貨物可能是幾十輛卡車之和，但是成本卻更低，因此投資回報率更高。

然後來看不應該忽略公路的原因，有三方麵原因。

一是在城市中，依靠鐵路出行的想法並不可行，人們(men) 依然需要依靠大量的道路和汽車完成日常通勤。

二是建設鐵路需要許多配套設施，比如火車站，綜合下來建設成本可能遠高於(yu) 公路，並且難以覆蓋到每一個(ge) 地方。因此，依然需要建造大量公路來滿足人們(men) 出行需求。

三是考慮到人們(men) 的私家車擁有量不斷上升，完善發達的道路係統能讓人出遊更便利，同時也能進一步促進汽車產(chan) 業(ye) 和旅遊業(ye) 等相關(guan) 行業(ye) 的發展。

3、提綱

劍11寫(xie) 作7分範文及解析 | Test1 投資鐵路而非公路

4、高分範文示例

The debate of how government should spend money has never ceased. People take diverse attitudes towards this issue. To me, I disagree with the statement that railways should be given more priority over roads in government budget. This essay will elaborate on my view and come to a tenable conclusion.

Admittedly, the railways do make a contribution to people’s life to some extent. The primary advantage lays emphasis on its role in increasing efficiency of travelling, especially for domestic journey. Evidence has shown that the train is ranked the most frequent used transport which is less likely to delay by weather compared with flights and have no risk of road congestion. Apart from that, safety is another important reason worthwhile to mention while considering the lives lost in traffic accidents on roads every year.

However, despite the benefits mentioned above, highway traffic appears to be a more attractive and affordable alternative to railways. Let’s first begin with comparing the two options from financial aspect. In contrast to the investment in a railway along with its various supporting facilities, construction of a road is not only cost effective but also time-saving, not to mention the subsequent maintaining cost. Taking this advantage one step further, we can forecast the potential value of building roads in stimulating other industries. Far from being a simple infrastructure, a highly developed road system will pave the way for an era of “life on wheels”, in which almost every family will be more likely to own a private car, thus making excursion a popular lifestyle consequently, which will eventually lead to a boom for both automobiles industry and domestic tourism.

In conclusion, from what has been discussed above, though the benefits of railways cannot be ignored, I am profoundly convinced that its development should not be at the cost of roads, and the authority ought to give equal consideration on both realms.

5、相關(guan) 詞匯和語法結構

Take diverse attitudes toward 采取不同的態度對待

Given more priority over 優(you) 先考慮

Government budget 政府預算

Elaborate 複雜的；詳盡的

Tenable （某種想法）說得過去；站得住腳

Lays emphasis on 將重點放在

The most frequent used 最常用的

Worthwhile to mention 值得一提的是

Attractive 有吸引力的

Affordable 負擔得起的

Alternative 可供替代的