10.22大陸雅思大作文7分範文及解析：噪音的原因和解決辦法

報告類大作文，環境類話題

The level of noise around us is constantly increasing, and is affecting the quality of our lives. What cause the noise? What should be done about it?

題目來源：2022年10月22日大陸雅思大作文

1、題目大意

我們(men) 周圍的噪音水平不斷增加，並且影響我們(men) 的生活質量。是什麽(me) 導致了噪音？應該如何處理？

2、思路解析

這是一道報告類大作文，聊得是噪音汙染的原因和解決(jue) 辦法，題目非常基礎，報告類文章結構也相對簡單，兩(liang) 個(ge) 主體(ti) 段分別對應兩(liang) 個(ge) 問題，主體(ti) 段一分析原因，主體(ti) 段二提出解決(jue) 辦法。情報圈3個(ge) 月前也發過一篇噪音相關(guan) 的範文，有興(xing) 趣的同學可以在曆史推文記錄中查看。下麵，我們(men) 來看這道題目具體(ti) 觀點。

首先來看原因，有三方麵

一是工業(ye) 噪音上升，人口擴張導致人們(men) 的需求進一步增加，更多工廠在生產(chan) 的過程中會(hui) 不斷產(chan) 生的噪音，同時越來越多的工程建設，同樣會(hui) 帶來巨大的噪音影響附近居民。

二是交通工具噪音增加，在過去幾十年中，人們(men) 擁有的汽車、飛機等交通工具數量上升，這些交通工具的發動機聲音或鳴笛等都會(hui) 成為(wei) 噪音的一部分。

三是個(ge) 人的不良行為(wei) 同樣會(hui) 產(chan) 生噪音，比如手機在如今生活中已經非常普及，但伴隨而來的是人們(men) 在公共場合大聲打電話或者外放音樂(le) 和視頻，都會(hui) 成為(wei) 噪音一部分，這在幾十年前是不存在的。

然後來看解決(jue) 辦法，主要是三方麵。

一是通過新技術能夠降低機器生產(chan) 過程中或交通工具運行過程中產(chan) 生的噪音，同時使用諸如隔音擋板等設備，減少現有的噪音對於(yu) 周圍居民的影響。

二是政府可以出台法令法規，要求工廠、機場等容易產(chan) 生噪音的設施必須遠離居民區，以及規定汽車對於(yu) 鳴笛的使用，以減少噪音汙染。

三是通過宣傳(chuan) ，提高人們(men) 的公共意識，避免在公共場合發出個(ge) 人噪音。

3、提綱

4、高分範文示例

The unpleasant sound that disrupts the lives of humans and animals is referred to as "Noise Pollution" As a result of a rise in external noise levels, individuals' lifestyles are becoming highly imbalanced. This essay will examine why these problems exist and what can be done to resolve them.

Initially, industrial activity was one of the primary causes. To elaborate, the rate of population expansion is proportional to the increase in product manufacturing, which is the fundamental cause of the meteoric rise in industrial noise levels. In addition, the growing number of automobiless on the road causes a tremendous amount of noise. This is due to growing car traffic, which has become a significant environmental and human problem. In addition, the noise generated by massive loudspeakers at occasions such as parties and weddings interrupts the lives of individuals. Recent research in Asian countries, for example, revealed that human activities account for an astounding 80% of noise.Thus, factory operations and automobiles traffic are the reasons for the elevated noise proportion.

Despite the fact that there are multiple explanations for the rising discontent, I believe that this problem can be minimised by the government if smart measures are taken. First, the government's stringent enforcement of laws forbidding the production of sound above the permissible limits against lawbreakers. Second, firms should install soundproof barriers to lower noise levels, and industry should be restricted to isolated places far from residential areas. In order to lower noise levels, trees should be planted in a straight line in locations with considerable traffic. When such limitations were strictly applied in Africa, decibel levels plummeted. The government may therefore play a major role in tackling the issue of rising noise levels.

This essay concludes by discussing how the growth in industrial activity and traffic noise are the key causes of the rise in noise pollution. Furthermore, it was suggested that imposing strict regulations and installing noise barriers could mitigate the severity of the problem.

5、相關(guan) 詞匯和語法結構

unpleasant   不愉快的

disrupts   擾亂(luan)

increase in   在……方麵增長

account for   導致、對……負有責任

soundproof   隔音的

decibel   分貝

plummet   暴跌、快速降低