雅思大作文7分範文及解析：提供免費自行車

觀點類大作文，交通類話題

Some people believe that the best solution for many traffic problems would be for the governments to provide all adult citizens with free bicycles. To what extent do you agree or disagree？

題目來源：2022年6月25日亞(ya) 太雅思大作文

1、題目大意

有些人認為(wei) ，解決(jue) 許多交通問題的最好辦法是由政府向所有成年公民提供免費的自行車。你是否同意

2、思路解析

這是一道觀點類題目，聊的是解決(jue) 交通最好的辦法是不是提供免費自行車。審題時注意兩(liang) 點，一是題目中包含絕對詞“the best”和“all adult”，一般遇到絕對詞從(cong) 反對角度切入更合理。二是題目明確提到了“free bicycles”，因此需要圍繞這點的合理性展開論證。下麵，月半鴨和大家一起來看具體(ti) 觀點。

首先來看這個(ge) 觀點的合理性，有三方麵。

一是騎車可以減少人們(men) 對私家車的依賴，道路上車輛減少可以有效避免交通擁堵問題。

二是自行車並不會(hui) 增加人們(men) 的出行成本，其不存在額外的燃油消耗，零件的維護保養(yang) 成本相較於(yu) 汽車也可以忽略不計。

三是騎車作為(wei) 一種綠色出行方式，無需擔心廢氣排放所造成的環境汙染問題。

其次來看其中的問題，有三點。

一是政府給所有人提供免費的自行車會(hui) 產(chan) 生巨大的成本，特別是那些擁有幾百萬(wan) 甚至千萬(wan) 級別人口的大城市，自行車的采購費用對政府財政來說是一種巨大的負擔。

二是自行車的使用受到天氣和地理環境影響。一旦出現下雨、下雪甚至更加惡劣的天氣環境，騎車出行對騎車者的身體(ti) 健康和安全是一種挑戰。而對於(yu) 坡道和山地為(wei) 主的城市來說（比如重慶），有些人即使耗盡所有體(ti) 力可能也難以騎車上坡，騎行反而讓他們(men) 舉(ju) 步維艱。

三是對於(yu) 遠距離出行來說，騎車的效率過於(yu) 低下。在常規路況下，開車一小時能達到距離，騎車可能要花費3倍甚至更多時間。這樣的出行速度對於(yu) 那些遠距離上班者是不現實的，即使考慮到環保，也可以選擇公共交通或地鐵出行。

3、提綱

4、高分範文示例

Some assert that the bicycle is the preferred mode of urban transportation, while others disagree. I personally believe using bicycles as a means of transportation within a city  can undoubtedly promote city efficiency, but there will also be disadvantages.

One of the most obvious advantages of owning a bicycle in urban places is the flexibility to ride without suffering traffic issues. In other words, a cyclist can readily avoid traffic problems such as congestion. Additionally, there is no fuel expenditure. All the pedals require is regular maintenance and the replacement of worn-out parts. Almost nothing is spent on bicycle upkeep. If the bike's owner manages it well, the bike will last for a long time. The poorest scenario that could occur to a customer is a flat tire, but even that is not the worst thing they may experience. Moreover, the lack of complexity in bicycles' structures compared to other vehicles demonstrates the cost-effectiveness of this mode of urban transportation.

Despite these advantages, however, bicycles carry a number of clear downsides. Bicycles cannot measure up to other modes of transportation in terms of efficiency. Long distances cannot be covered with the assistance of pedals. Humans are responsible for the dynamics of the bicycle. There are a small number of speed indicators, despite the fact that a bicycle's transportation requires no fuel. Bicycle riders may also be reluctant to travel long distances on their bicycles. This is a clear example of a pedal's weak point. Since there are numerous methods for picking a car, I believe that everyone should choose their own mode of transportation.

Despite the fact that there are advantages to using bicycles in urban areas, the disadvantages of this mode of transportation were noted more frequently than the advantages. Even if the price-to-quality ratio of a bicycle makes it the ideal form of transportation, its low productivity still makes it a less satisfying choice.

5、相關(guan) 詞匯和語法結構

fuel expenditure   燃料支出

a flat tire   漏氣的輪胎

urban transportation   城市交通

measure up to   與(yu) ……一致

in terms of efficiency   就效率而言

weak point   弱點