1.28大陸雅思大作文7分範文及解析：去偏遠地區旅遊的利弊

利弊類大作文，旅遊類話題

Organizing tours to remote places and communities is becoming more and more popular. Is it a positive or negative development for the local people and environment？

題目來源：2023年1月28日大陸雅思大作文（重複2020年4月25日亞(ya) 太雅思考題）

1、題目大意

組織到偏遠地區和社區的旅遊正變得越來越流行。這對當地人和環境來說是積極還是消極的發展？

2、思路解析

這是一道利弊類大作文，聊得是偏遠地區旅遊對於(yu) 當地的利弊影響。利弊類大作文需要強調在論證上體(ti) 現合理性，即在具體(ti) 的分析中，明確能體(ti) 現出一邊的論述的確是大於(yu) 另一邊，或是利弊均等，而利弊是否有說服力並不取決(jue) 於(yu) 觀點的數量，而是內(nei) 容是否有說服力。審題時注意兩(liang) 點，一是“remote places and communities”，旅遊目的地限定在偏遠地區，需要考慮當地特性。二是“local people and environment”，利弊討論需要圍繞在當地人和環境上。下麵，月半鴨和大家一起來看下具體(ti) 觀點。

首先來看好處，有兩(liang) 方麵。

一是前往偏遠地區旅遊能促進當地經濟發展。大量遊客不僅(jin) 能夠直接推動旅遊業(ye) 的發展，還能帶動當地交通、酒店住宿、商品銷售等相關(guan) 產(chan) 業(ye) 發展，而當地人能夠從(cong) 中獲得更多工作機會(hui) 以及更高的收入。

二是偏遠地區旅遊能夠推增加遊客對當地文化和曆史的了解，促進人們(men) 對當地關(guan) 注的同時，也有助於(yu) 保護這些當地特色。

然後來看壞處，可以分成對當地人和環境兩(liang) 個(ge) 角度來說。

對當地人來講，大量遊客產(chan) 生的噪音可能會(hui) 破壞當地人的寧靜生活，巨大的人流量也會(hui) 給當地的交通、餐飲、水電供應等方麵帶來負擔，甚至超過其本身能承受的範圍，反而影響到當地人的正常生活。

對於(yu) 當地環境來說，許多遊客的亂(luan) 丟(diu) 垃圾或不文明的行為(wei) 會(hui) 對自然環境造成破壞。同時，一些原本從(cong) 事農(nong) 業(ye) 相關(guan) 的當地人發現有更容易賺錢的機會(hui) 後，也會(hui) 拋棄原本的工作，進而造成土地荒廢等問題。

3、提綱

4、高分範文示例

Since the beginning of time, primitive men have traveled tremendous distances for food, clothing, and a better habitat. However, tourism in its modern mass form is a phenomenon particular to the twenty-first century, and it frequently signifies the emergence of a large new business that both creates opportunities and becomes a problem for many governments throughout the globe.

Many people have different thoughts about what tourists might offer underdeveloped areas and communities. As one of the major elements of the tertiary economy, tourism initiates a chain of economic indicators, including value-added capital investment, employment, and tax contributions. There are also many who believe that its economic impact is unknown and that the tours frequently upset the locals' daily lives. It is challenging to assess tourism's impact on remote areas and communities because the industries that seem to thrive because of tourism, like food and accommodation, also serve the residents. But visits actually become an issue when the residents find themselves fully occupied by outsiders everywhere; they are upset to see so many strangers in public places, shops, restaurants, or even at their front gates.

However, individuals may readily agree on the deep, detrimental consequences of tourism on local communities' environments, and they worry about the ecological damage caused by a wide range of tourism activities. Once locations, particularly fragile ones, are reconstructed as tourist resorts, conflicts arise between the natural resources and the invasion of modern facilities.  It is evident what individuals would choose to do if they could make more in a few weeks working as porters for tourists than they could in a year labouring in the fields. Likewise, this is considered a possible trigger for desertification.

In conclusion, regardless of how the ecosystem of certain rural locations would be badly impacted by tourism, I would still view it as a positive method to improve the lives of locals. These regions flourish when they are well-known among those who are willing to pay to travel.

5、相關(guan) 詞匯和語法結構

Primitive   原始的

habitat   棲息地

signify   預示、表示

economic indicators   經濟指標

be upset to   對…感到不安

ecosystem   生態係統