雅思大作文7分範文及解析：父母角色的差異

報告類大作文，社會(hui) 類話題

In some societies, the role of a mother differs in some ways from the role of a father. Why do you think these differences exist? How might parental roles develop in the future?

題目來源：2015年11月21日大陸雅思大作文

1、題目大意

在一些社會(hui) 中，母親(qin) 的角色在某些方麵與(yu) 父親(qin) 的角色不同。你認為(wei) 這些差異存在的原因是什麽(me) ？家長的角色將來會(hui) 如何發展？

2、思路解析

這是一道報告類大作文，聊的是父母角色差異的原因和未來發展方向。報告類題目的行文結構相對簡單，兩(liang) 個(ge) 主體(ti) 段分別對應兩(liang) 個(ge) 問題，主體(ti) 段一分析這一現象的原因，主體(ti) 段二討論未來的可能性。審題的時候注意，題目討論的是男女差異的原因而非單純差異點是什麽(me) 。下麵月半鴨和大家一起來看下具體(ti) 觀點。

首先來看產(chan) 生差異的原因，有兩(liang) 方麵。

一是生理上的差異，女性承擔了生育和哺乳的功能，意味著母親(qin) 必須要花更多時間來照顧孩子特別是嬰兒(er) ，而這些能力是父親(qin) 所不具備的。同時男性體(ti) 格更加健碩，更能承擔體(ti) 力勞動，因此在古代依靠狩獵或農(nong) 耕的情況下，男性承擔了更多養(yang) 家糊口的角色。

二是在傳(chuan) 統的父權社會(hui) 或是宗教社會(hui) 中，往往使男性處在支配地位而女性處於(yu) 服從(cong) 地位，因此在家庭中更多由男性進行主導並進行工作，而女性則更多留在家中照顧丈夫和孩子的生活起居。

然後再來看未來可能發展的方向。

隨著教育普及、男女平權以及工作崗位變化等一係列因素，妻子不再作為(wei) 丈夫的附屬，且女性可以和男性一樣工作養(yang) 家糊口甚至賺取更多收入，而照顧孩子的責任則由雙方討論決(jue) 定，可以共同承擔或由時間更空餘(yu) 的一方承擔，未來會(hui) 出現越來越多男性承擔照顧孩子的情況。

3、提綱

4、高分範文示例

The cultural context present in diverse places of the world is deeply intertwined with the differing parental roles found within households. The purpose of this essay is to explore the underlying causes of such divergences and to assess their future possible direction.

In some parts of the world, parenting styles between mothers and fathers differ, but we must examine the cultural context in which these families exist. In certain societies, it is a long-standing tradition for men to venture into the outside world to overcome obstacles and provide for their families, while women maintain order within the household. This dynamic can lead to a situation where fathers focus on meeting their children's basic needs, while mothers take a more holistic approach to their upbringing, from their daily routines to their education and emotional well-being. In essence, while dads are the breadwinners, moms are the heart and soul of the family unit, working tirelessly to ensure their children thrive in every aspect of their lives.

However, the future of parenting in our modern world will undoubtedly be shaped by the clash between traditional values and the innovative ideals that arise from industrialization. Some predict that as women continue to strive for gender equality, they will venture out from under the protective umbrella of men and seize new opportunities, taking on the role of the ultimate caregiver and leaving their husbands to tend to the children. Others believe that as the nature of work continues to evolve, both parents will be able to work remotely and participate equally in child rearing. Despite these exciting possibilities, there are still parts of the world where old-fashioned beliefs persist, and parents will have to break free from outdated conventions to achieve true gender equity in their parenting roles.

In conclusion, the cultural backdrop of certain nations has a significant impact on the divergent parenting styles exhibited by mothers and fathers. As for the evolution of parental roles, this hinges on a complex interplay of societal factors that are yet to be fully recognized.

5、相關(guan) 詞匯和語法結構

intertwine   密切關(guan) 聯

divergence   （意見、態度的）分歧

venture into   冒險進入

Opportunist   機會(hui) 主義(yi) 者

Simultaneously   同時

Scenario   情況