雅思大作文7分範文及解析：政府投資更快的交通

雙邊類大作文，交通類話題

Some people think governments should spend money on faster means of public transport. However, others think money should be spent on other priorities (eg cost, environment ). Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

題目來源：2018年11月10日亞(ya) 太雅思大作文

1、題目大意

有些人認為(wei) 政府應該把錢花在更快的公共交通工具上。然而，其他人認為(wei) 錢應該花在其他優(you) 先事項上（如生活成本、環境）。討論雙方觀點並給出自己的看法。

2、思路解析

這是一道雙邊類大作文，討論的是政府應該投資更快的公共交通還是其他項目。雙邊類大作文，需要對每個(ge) 觀點分別表達同意或反對，最終的結論就是我的立場，可以是中立（雙方都同意或都反對），也可以是單邊支持某一方立場。審題時需要注意兩(liang) 點，一是前者觀點討論對象是“faster means of public transport”，而不是單純公共交通，因此考慮到“更快”的意義(yi) 。二是後者觀點提到了“cost”和“environment”，因此在論證過程中需要提及。下麵月半鴨和大家一起來看下具體(ti) 觀點。

首先來看支持更快公共交通的觀點，有三方麵。

一是能夠提高城市運行效率，更快的公共交通意味著人們(men) 可以更快地從(cong) 一個(ge) 地方到達另一個(ge) 地方，原本用於(yu) 通勤的時間可以用於(yu) 完成其他事情，這樣可以提高城市的整體(ti) 效率。

二是對於(yu) 個(ge) 人來說，減少了通勤時間，人們(men) 不僅(jin) 可以減少通勤上的耗費的精力，還有更多的時間用於(yu) 家庭、休閑或個(ge) 人發展，從(cong) 而提高生活質量。

三是能夠緩解交通擁堵和保護環境，快速的公共交通可以容納更多的乘客且讓人出行更便利，這意味著更少的人會(hui) 選擇開私家車。這可以有效地減少路上的車輛數量，既能緩解交通擁堵，也可以減少燃油消耗和碳排放，從(cong) 而對環境保護有利。

再來看後者觀點的合理性，有兩(liang) 方麵。

一方麵建設快速的公共交通係統需要巨大的資金投入，包括購買(mai) 新的車輛、修建軌道等基礎設施，以及長期的運營和維護費用。這些資金如果用於(yu) 其他領域，例如教育、醫療、消費等，可能對民生的改善更為(wei) 明顯，帶來更大的社會(hui) 效益。

另一方麵雖然快速的公共交通可能會(hui) 減少燃油消耗和碳排放，但是建設過程可能本身會(hui) 破壞自然環境，並且有些更嚴(yan) 重的環境問題比如荒漠化和水汙染可能更直接威脅到人們(men) 的生存，因此需要政府投入更多資金在環境保護上。

3、提綱

4、高分範文示例

Residents frequently use public transportation to commute. Some people say that the authorities should invest money in accelerating public transport system, while others believe that improvement in other areas is an absolute necessity. In my opinion, increasing the speed at which public transportation operates is not the most pressing issue. Instead, other concerns, such as the cost of living and environmental protection, merit more consideration.

On the one side, it is indisputable that commute time is one of the most crucial criteria when selecting modes of transportation. People routinely lose hours each year to mundane activities like waiting for the bus and commuting. In an effort to save as much time as possible, city residents typically own their own vehicles for transport. Once the pace of public transportation is increased, it will be more appealing for people to take public transit, which adheres to a schedule and reduces their commute time. At the same time, when a greater number of private automobiles owners switch to public transportation, it will greatly alleviate traffic congestion and exhaust pollution, which will be beneficial to the environment.

Alternatively, daily cost reduction and environmental preservation should also be considered. Some individuals can no longer afford or have access to essential necessities due to currency inflation. Some underprivileged families find it hard to obtain food and clothing, let alone a house. In the interim, the consequences of environmental degradation have grown further obvious. In conjunction with the greenhouse effect and sea level rise, global warming has posed a grave threat to the human race. Therefore, government involvement is necessary to resolve the problem and safeguard the populace from potential harm. Other regulations and upgrades will only be of greater benefit to individuals if their most fundamental safety demands are addressed first.

In conclusion, despite the fact that increasing the frequency of public transportation is favourable for some commuters, government resources should be allocated to more critical priorities in order to ensure a sustainable world for all individuals.

5、相關(guan) 詞匯和語法結構

Commute   通勤

Modes of transportation   交通方式

Mundane activities   平凡的活動

Adheres to a schedule   遵守時間表

Alleviate traffic congestion   緩解交通擁堵

Environmental degradation   環境退化

Greenhouse effect   溫室效應

Sea level rise   海平麵上升

Grave threat   嚴(yan) 重威脅

Safeguard the populace   保護人民

Fundamental safety demands   基本的安全需求

Sustainable world   可持續的世界