劍18寫作範文及解析 | Test3 地圖題

地圖題

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

題目來源：劍18Test3小作文

1、題目大意

圖中顯示了20年前公共圖書(shu) 館的平麵圖以及現在的樣子。通過選擇和報告主要特征來總結信息，並在相關(guan) 情況下進行比較。

高分範文示例

開頭段 - 改寫(xie) 題目

The diagrams illustrate the transformation of the Central Library's layout over a span of two decades. The most striking change is the modernization of the library to accommodate technological advancements and the evolving needs of its patrons.

主體(ti) 段1 - 描述20年前的圖書(shu) 館

Twenty years ago, the library was primarily divided into sections for different types of books and media. The children's section was specifically dedicated to books, while a separate section was allocated for CDs, videos, and computer games. The adult section was bifurcated into fiction and non-fiction books. A reading room was available for newspapers and magazines, and an enquiry desk handled tickets and book returns.

主體(ti) 段2 - 描述現在圖書(shu) 館，提及變化

Fast forward to the present day, the library has undergone significant changes. The children's section now exclusively contains fiction books, and storytelling events are a new addition. The adult section remains dedicated to fiction books, but all reference books are now consolidated into a single area. The enquiry desk has been replaced by self-service machines, reflecting the shift towards automation. Notably, the library has expanded its services to include a computer room and a café, catering to the digital needs and comfort of its users. A lecture room has also been introduced, indicating a focus on educational events.

總結段

In conclusion, the Central Library has evolved over the past 20 years, transitioning from a traditional book-centric model to a more diverse, user-friendly hub that embraces technology and community engagement. This transformation reflects broader societal changes and the dynamic role of libraries in the 21st century.

3、相關(guan) 詞匯和語法結構

Transformation   變化，轉變

Span of two decades   二十年的跨度

Technological advancements   技術進步

Bifurcated   分為(wei) 兩(liang) 部分

Consolidated   合並的

Catering to   迎合，滿足（某種需求或期望）

User-friendly   用戶友好的

Embraces technology   擁抱技術

Broader societal changes   更廣泛的社會(hui) 變化

The most striking change   最顯著的變化

Fast forward to the present day   快進到現在

Undergone significant changes   經曆了重大變化

Have been replaced by   已被...替代

Reflecting the shift towards   反映了向...的轉變

Expanded its services to include   擴大了其服務範圍，包括

Enquiry desk   谘詢台

Self-service machines   自助服務機