雅思大作文7分範文及解析：選擇兼職工作的利弊

利弊類大作文，工作類話題

Some people tend to take temporary jobs, for they have the time to do other things they are interested in.  Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

題目來源：2009年12月3日大陸雅思大作文

1、題目大意

一些人傾(qing) 向於(yu) 做臨(lin) 時的工作，這樣他們(men) 就能有時間做其他感興(xing) 趣的事情。這件事的好處大於(yu) 壞處嗎？

2、思路解析

這是一道利弊類大作文，聊的是做臨(lin) 時工作的利弊。利弊類大作文需要強調在論證上體(ti) 現合理性，即在具體(ti) 的分析中，明確能體(ti) 現出一邊的論述的確是大於(yu) 另一邊，或是利弊均等，而利弊是否有說服力並不取決(jue) 於(yu) 觀點的數量，而是內(nei) 容是否有說服力。審題時注意一點，題目中明確提出有時間是做“ things they are interested in”，因此在論證時要圍繞這個(ge) 展開。下麵，月半鴨和大家一起來看下具體(ti) 觀點。

首先來看這樣做的弊端，主要有兩(liang) 方麵。

一方麵這意味著缺乏穩定的收入來源和福利。臨(lin) 時工作意味著當事人沒有長期穩定的收入保障，同時公司也很少會(hui) 為(wei) 臨(lin) 時工提供完善的福利，比如醫療保險、退休金等。

另一方麵當時人的職業(ye) 發展容易受限。臨(lin) 時員工由於(yu) 工作時間較短且不穩定，很難和其他員工建立深厚的關(guan) 係，公司也很少會(hui) 給這類員工提供充分的培訓及晉升機會(hui) 。

再來看好處，同樣有兩(liang) 方麵。

一是有更多的自由時間和靈活性。選擇臨(lin) 時工作使得人們(men) 有更多的時間投資於(yu) 個(ge) 人興(xing) 趣，如學習(xi) 、旅行或其他愛好，可以更好的平衡工作和生活，緩解疲勞和壓力。

二是有時間能夠追求自己的興(xing) 趣愛好，不僅(jin) 可以在精神層麵獲得滿足感和成就感。還能在此過程中提高技能，甚至將興(xing) 趣發展成工作之一來賺取收入。

3、提綱

4、高分範文示例

In the shifting sands of today's job market, an increasing number of individuals are opting for the ephemeral allure of temporary roles over the enduring stability of long-term employment. Despite the undeniable challenges this choice may present, I contend that its potential benefits far outweigh its drawbacks.

On the one hand, the transient nature of temporary jobs can breed an undercurrent of uncertainty. The most immediate concern lies in the erratic income these roles often provide, a sharp contrast to the financial stability that is the cornerstone of a comfortable existence for most. Additionally, the frequent oscillation between companies, or even industries, can erect formidable barriers to cultivating a cohesive professional network within a particular sphere. Perhaps most significantly, an ongoing commitment to temporary roles can inadvertently rob one of the opportunity to forge a substantial career, a feat that typically demands the slow, unwavering dedication of time and effort.

Conversely, the flexibility afforded by temporary employment can serve as a liberating force. For those blessed with talent and a sprinkle of fortune, the ample free time could potentially transform a cherished hobby into a lucrative vocation. The annals of literature, for instance, brim with tales of celebrated writers who initially penned their stories as a leisurely pursuit, only to later find their works revered across the globe. Furthermore, the freedom to invest time in personal interests can enhance one's sense of fulfilment and happiness, a stark contrast to the dispirited souls shackled to long hours in jobs they despise. Another boon of temporary employment is the autonomy it grants over one's schedule, facilitating the balance of work and personal life and affording the luxury of spontaneous travel or precious moments spent with loved ones.

In conclusion, the ephemeral nature of temporary work, despite its inherent challenges, can significantly enrich one's life experience, particularly for those resilient enough to navigate the potential tribulations this career path may present.

5、相關(guan) 詞匯和語法結構

Shifting sands of job market   就業(ye) 市場不穩定、不確定性

Ephemeral allure   短暫的吸引力

Enduring stability   持久的穩定性

Undeniable challenges   不可否認的挑戰

Transient nature   短暫的本質

Undercurrent of uncertainty   不確定性的暗流

Erratic income   不穩定的收入

Frequent oscillation   頻繁的振蕩

Formidable barriers   強大的障礙

Cohesive professional network   有凝聚力的專(zhuan) 業(ye) 網絡

Liberating force   解放的力量

Cherished hobby   珍視的愛好

Lucrative vocation   有利可圖的職業(ye)

Dispirited souls   沮喪(sang) 的靈魂

Autonomy over one's schedule   對自己的時間表的自主權