組合圖類雅思小作文怎麽寫?

今天,我來教大家怎麽(me) 寫(xie) 組合圖類雅思小作文

老規矩,以下是正文目錄:

1,題目

2,高分範文

3,範文朗讀

4, 範文地道詞匯中英對照,包括:

  • 雅思小作文高分句型

  • 高分地道詞匯和短語

  • 展示“連貫與(yu) 銜接”的詞匯和短語

  • 組合圖小作文寫(xie) 作技巧

題目:

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the demand for electricity in England during typical days in winter and summer. The pie chart shows how electricity is used in an average English home.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.You should write at least 150 words.

雅思小作文組合圖,高分作文這樣寫(xie)

高分範文

(1)The line graph shows the average daily amount of electricity used for both winter and summer for UK households; while the pie chart contrasts the proportions of electricity used in four categories of household appliances.

Overall, residences in winter used over double the amount of daily electricity used in summer; however, the patterns for both seasons were similar, (2)with heating, including that for water, ranking highest for electricity usage.

From about 9:30 at night to midnight, electricity use declines in winter, and this also remains true for summer, though this drop begins about an hour and a half later. In winter, however, electricity consumption begins to pick up again and sees its morning high point at 3 am, using 40,000 units, and thereafter gradually decreases, so that by 9 am it will have fallen by a further 10, 000 units. Summer, on the other hand, only registers a decline of about 6,000 units from its peak the previous evening. Electricity use in winter witnesses its highest usage at just over 45,000 units by 9 pm; whereas, summer’s occurs at both 3 pm and midnight, to reach approximately 20,000 units respectively.

All heating consumes 52% of electricity, with the other three categories of appliances all having roughly the same proportion of electricity usage of between 15% to18%.

- Item to note 組合圖小作文寫(xie) 作技巧 -

(1) Notice that for the coherence of the essay, the introduction, the overall statement, the topic order of the essay, and the paragraphing, all follow the order of the charts given. In other words, the seasonal line graph is always first in all of the above areas. 在閱讀範文的過程中,仔細觀察全文和每一段的行文邏輯,就會(hui) 發現文章的結構,是按照題目給的圖表順序來的。具體(ti) 到這篇文章,那就是以第一個(ge) 圖表的內(nei) 容為(wei) 主線來展開。

(2) The word ‘with’ is one of the most important preposition-connectors used in task 1, as it gives MORE detailed information about the previous subject. In the overall statement, it used to transition the sentence from ‘the pattern’ to ‘the pie chart’. Remember, the pie chart is a ‘microcosm’ of each day within the year (the measurement of the line graph). 寫(xie)

任何雅思小作文,"with"這個(ge) 詞,一定一定要學會(hui) 去用它。 為(wei) 啥?因為(wei) with的後麵能帶上更多的細節信息。 我在第2段用到了with,從(cong) 而實現了從(cong) 圖1到圖2的順滑轉換。圖2展示的是圖1的細分信息,每天各類家電用電量的占比。

 

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