雅思大作文7分範文及解析：電腦使人能在家工作學習

利弊類大作文，科技類話題

Computers enable people to be able to work at home and children to study at home. Some people believe that it is convenient and cost-saving. Do you think the phenomenon positive or negative? 

題目來源：2008年11月8日大陸雅思大作文

1、題目大意

電腦使人們(men) 能夠在家工作，孩子們(men) 能夠在家學習(xi) 。有些人認為(wei) 這既方便又節省成本。您認為(wei) 這種現象是積極的還是消極

2、思路解析

這是一道利弊類大作文，聊的是電腦使人能在家工作學習(xi) 的利弊。利弊類大作文需要強調在論證上體(ti) 現合理性，即在具體(ti) 的分析中，明確能體(ti) 現出一邊的論述的確是大於(yu) 另一邊，或是利弊均等，而利弊是否有說服力並不取決(jue) 於(yu) 觀點的數量，而是內(nei) 容是否有說服力。審題時注意一點，一是題目中明確了提到了“家長”和“孩子”兩(liang) 個(ge) 主體(ti) ，因此在論證時需要分別提及。下麵，月半鴨和大家一起來看下具體(ti) 觀點。

首先來看好處，有三方麵。

一是使用計算機在家工作或學習(xi) 為(wei) 人們(men) 提供了極大的靈活性。作者可以根據自己的日程安排工作時間，不必局限於(yu) 傳(chuan) 統的辦公時間；學生可以按照自己的學習(xi) 節奏進行，不受課堂進度的限製。

二是遠程工作和學習(xi) 可以節省通勤費用和時間。對於(yu) 當事人或學生來說，長期在家工作或學習(xi) 可以減少每月的交通費用和花在路上的時間，也不必考慮異地工作或上學所產(chan) 生的住宿費用。

三是有利於(yu) 環境保護，由於(yu) 可以在家辦公學習(xi) ，減少了每日的上下班和學校的往返，因此汽車的使用量大大減少，進而降低了廢氣排放。

再來看負麵影響，同樣有三方麵。

一是在家工作可能導致工作和生活之間的界限變得模糊。有些人可能會(hui) 發現很難在工作和休息之間劃清界限，從(cong) 而導致工作壓力增加。

二是對於(yu) 工作黨(dang) 來說，在家工作效率可能會(hui) 更低。一方麵工作期間可能會(hui) 受到家庭幹擾或缺乏自律，另一方麵缺乏麵對麵交流可能導致誤解和溝通障礙，這些因素都會(hui) 導致工作效率變低甚至出錯。

三是對於(yu) 學生來說，在家學習(xi) 的效果可能不如傳(chuan) 統的課堂學習(xi) 。雖然在線教育為(wei) 學生提供了許多資源，但與(yu) 老師和同學麵對麵的交流可能對某些學生更有益，同時缺少了有效監督會(hui) 導致一些自律能力差的學生的學習(xi) 效果大大下滑。

3、提綱

4、高分範文示例

As technological advancements continue to proliferate, an increasing number of individuals are opting to work and study from the comfort of their homes. This shift has garnered both praise and criticism alike. In this discourse, I shall endeavor to elucidate the rationale behind opposition to this trend, subsequently highlighting its merits in order to substantiate my advocacy for offering such options in professional and educational settings.

There is a potential for adverse effects on productivity and learning efficacy when individuals choose to work or study from home. Certain individuals may struggle to establish an appropriate schedule, potentially leading to an overwhelming accumulation of tasks or even the failure to meet critical deadlines. Furthermore, communication challenges may arise in the absence of face-to-face interactions, as conveying nuanced information with precision and clarity can prove difficult. Text-based communication may inadvertently foster misunderstandings or discord among colleagues, given the absence of vocal tone and inflection. Moreover, while video calls offer a viable alternative, they may become burdensome when employed for trivial matters that occur frequently. In the context of online education, video-conferencing may hinder educators' abilities to gauge student comprehension and engagement, while also impeding peer-to-peer discussions among students.

It is crucial to emphasize that working and studying remotely are elective rather than obligatory. One of the most salient benefits of this arrangement is the provision of increased autonomy and choice for individuals. For particular categories of workers, such as freelancers, telecommuting facilitates a more adaptable and dynamic schedule. Consequently, these workers can optimize their efficiency, while also allocating time for personal pursuits, familial obligations, and domestic responsibilities. Companies that offer remote working options may experience an uptick in employee satisfaction as well. Additionally, remote working and distance learning can curtail daily expenses related to commuting and exorbitant housing costs in metropolitan areas. The savings accrued from reducing office or school space and utility expenses may enable organizations and educational institutions to enhance employee benefits and support services.

In conclusion, although remote working and learning may engender communication challenges, these modalities provide notable advantages for individuals with strong self-discipline and those who find traditional work or educational environments stifling. Consequently, the crux of the matter lies in affording individuals the choice to work or study from home, should they so desire.

5、相關(guan) 詞匯和語法結構

attract criticism   招致批評

backlog   工作積壓

compulsion   強迫

freelancer   自由職業(ye) 者

telecommuting   遠程辦公

flexible/agile schedule   靈活的時間表

commute   通勤

feel out of one’s element   無法適應環境

proliferate   擴散

elucidate   闡明

vocational tone and inflection   職業(ye) 語調和聲調變化

gauge student comprehension   評估學生理解

salient benefits   顯著好處

exorbitant housing costs   高昂的住房成本

metropolitan areas   大城市地區