雅思考試流程圖到底應該怎麽寫？

今天講解的是劍橋雅思8第78頁流程圖（生產(chan) 製作類）。

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一個(ge) 流程包含4個(ge) 部分

1.原材料(raw materials)

2.設備(equipment, apparatus)

3.處理辦法(be done)

4.產(chan) 物或中間產(chan) 物(product)

Introduction: 改寫(xie) 題目補充詞匯:轉移/運輸 transport; transfer; send; bring1.

中間段落的第一句話交代原材料As for cement making, limestone and clay are the raw materials used in this process.

2.任何一個(ge) 設備的後麵都可以跟where從(cong) 句In the first stage, limestone and clay are sent to a crusher,wherethey are crushed to produce powder.

3. 任何兩(liang) 個(ge) 步驟之間都可以使用once/after(一旦…)進行連接Once/afterthe powder is mixed in a mixer, it is further transported to a rotating heater,whereit is heated for sometime.

4.任何兩(liang) 個(ge) 步驟之間也可以使用after which進行連接Then the powder is mixed in a mixer,after whichit is further transported to a rotating heater,whereit is heated for some time.

5.任何一個(ge) 產(chan) 物的後麵都可以跟一個(ge) 非限製性定語從(cong) 句(,which)In step four, the mixture is groundby a grinder and at the same time it is manufactured to cement,whichalso needs to be packed into bags in the final stage.

6.同一個(ge) 步驟中有兩(liang) 個(ge) 處理過程while，時間狀語從(cong) 句

7.合理的使用過渡詞進行過渡(筆記中紅色加粗的部分)In the first/initial stage,the whole process begins with doing......In step two,The second step involves doing…...The whole process ends at…...

參考範文▼

The diagrams illustrate the phases and apparatus to make cement and how cement is utilized in the production of concrete for construction.The production of cementstarts withcrushing limestone and clay by a crusher to make powder, whichis then mixed in the next step.

After that, the mixture is passed through a rotatingheater, whereit is heated for some time.Once ground by a grinder in step four, the cement is produced, and it also needs to be packed in the final stage.Concrete is made up of half gravel, quarter sand, 10% water and 15% cement.

All of these are added together into a rotating concretemixer, wherethey are heated for a proper time until concrete is yielded.To sum up, the production of cement involves a 5 stage process that begins with crushing raw materials and ends at the packaging of new cement. Making concrete is a simpler process that involves mixing four ingredients in a concrete mixer.