外刊中值得學習的文章寫作結構分享

這是過去一周我們(men) 外刊解析的值得模仿的寫(xie) 作結構：

讓步 + 轉折 的文章結構

# P2 讓步段 At first blush, there’s nothing all that amazing about Pal’s.....

P3 轉折  Dig deeper and you see that...

# On the surface + 自己不認同的讓步觀點….. But if you dig a little deeper,….+ 自己觀點

# Certainly 表示讓步

Certainly, as Pletter noted, kids don’t really need the help of a digital device to gaze at their reflections or familiarize themselves with their face; after all, kids got along just fine for millennia without selfies. But…

引入觀點和例子

# 引觀點的方式

As Lene Rachel Andersen and Tomas Bjorkman put it in their book “The Nordic Secret,” “Bildung is the way that the individual matures and takes upon him or herself ever bigger personal responsibility towards family, friends, fellow citizens, society, humanity, our globe, and the global heritage of our species, while enjoying ever bigger personal, moral and existential freedoms.”

# 引出不同意見

But not without pushback. … 但不是沒有反對聲音 + 不同觀點內(nei) 容

# 引入例子的方式

觀點 + Research on experiential avoidance backs this up,… + 例子

# 引入例子的方式

觀點. + This dovetails with (符合) the finding that + 句子證據

# part of …… part of 引出理由

My connection to the food, though, feels completely authentic. Part of this stems from food’s special power as the most accessible of cultural touchstones. But part of it is that this is what I ate as a child, what I genuinely grew up with, because of who my mom is, even if she, and these dishes, originated somewhere thousands of miles away.

引入總結內(nei) 容

# 例子結束以後的總結 

The most obvious takeaway would be that

# In short 最後一段總結詞

In short, the broad forces hitting retail are more a lesson in economics than in the power of disruptive technology. It’s a lesson all retailers will have to learn someday — even the mighty Amazon.

並列的結構好美

# 並列結構會(hui) 提高易讀性

- Remembering these altruistic intentions helps me reach common ground with the parents who call the Office of Family Engagement to complain that their daughters are unable to register for their preferred classes, are intimidated by their professors, are not happy with the water pressure in the dorm showers, are worried their roommates don’t like them or are dissatisfied with the food options on campus.

- For people such as Mongeon, the art teacher, they …. For a lot of people, they …. For a generation,…