TOEFL考試寫作思路及技巧分享：一魚兩做

什麽(me) 叫“一魚兩(liang) 做”呢，就是一條魚，兩(liang) 種做法。比如魚頭做湯，魚身紅燒...

TOEFL的例子展開也可以這麽(me) 用，靈感來自於(yu) 一位我們(men) 最近的幾次考試的寫(xie) 作都拿到28+的小美女考生。

題目：

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

When you have been friends with someone for a long time, it is important to continue your friendship with that person even if he or she does something you do not like.

先來看一下文章的讓步段：

Surely, people may feel unhappy when their friends do something they do not like, and it is hard for people to continue their friendship. For instance, my brother’s friend took my brother’s laptop without asking him. Because he thought that they had been friends for a long time, it is no need for him to ask my brother. However, after my brother knew it, he was very angry. He did not like people bring his things without asking. He thinks this behavior is very impolite. So my brother had an argument with his old friends. And they still do not talk to each other  for quite a long-period of time. In this light, it is hard for people to maintain friendship with other people who made something that they do not like.

首先從(cong) 文章結構上來說，第一句是很好的點題，段末還有一個(ge) 總結。

但是我們(men) 這裏要強調的是，例子部分用了一個(ge) 自己編的例子，用的語言是相對直白的，而且還會(hui) 有些小瑕疵，但這些都不會(hui) 阻礙你拿到哪怕30的滿分。

這個(ge) 例子從(cong) 對應性上來說，很好的展開了如果朋友做一些讓另外一方不開心的事情，友誼會(hui) 受到影響的觀點。

但這一點依然不是我們(men) 今天講解的重點，前麵開始的時候說了，我們(men) 今天要強調的是例子的一魚兩(liang) 做。現在我們(men) 來看下下一段：

However, it is 重不重要取決(jue) 於(yu) 有米有好處, 所以這裏要改為(wei) old friends 之間的矛盾會(hui) 解決(jue) 的。【it is rational to think that the conflicts between old friends will sooner or later be resolved  】Since they have experienced and encountered various issues. They know how to have a communication and talk to each other face to face  to solve the problem. Telling each other which thing they do not like and which thing they like. In this way, they can understand each other more than before. Take the same example of my brother and his friend. After a long time, they had a communication. My brother told his friend about his feelings and why he behaved like that. Then his friend felt very sorry and apologized to him. Also, his friend promised that he would not do this thing again. After that communication, they became friends again. In this regard, it is better for old friends to find a good way to solve the problem instead of  breaking the friendship.

這一段的第一句原先有點瑕疵，不夠直接點題。但是要真正強調的是黃色highlight 的部分，這個(ge) 部分再次利用了上段中的例子。這種一個(ge) 例子，幾處用的方法，有些考生可能會(hui) 覺得重複了，這一點大可不必擔心，因為(wei) 展開的detail 是不一樣的，隻是角色相同，和重複是完全不同的概念。

另外，通過一條主線的反複用，讓段與(yu) 段之間內(nei) 容上的coherence 變的特別好。同時也讓文章的易讀性得以提升。

所以，如果你在寫(xie) 作的時候也剛好有類似的思路，不妨也一試啊。