雅思範文：刑滿釋放的罪犯繼續犯罪的原因及解決辦法

Many criminals continue to commit crimes even after being punished for it. Why do you think this happens? How can we solve this problem?

解析與(yu) 審題

題材：犯罪

題型：Report

關(guan) 鍵詞：criminals continue to commit crimes + reasons + solutions

需要討論的觀點：被懲罰後的罪犯繼續犯罪，原因何在，怎麽(me) 解決(jue) ？

建議思路：從(cong) 物質、心理、社會(hui) 三大層次分析原因，然後提出解決(jue) 辦法

複現情況：古老舊題

本次考試的題材涉及犯罪，是一個(ge) 非常古老的題目，應該在2010年以前出現過。

老師多次提醒過，對於(yu) “原因分析”類的題目，我們(men) 都可以采用“三大層次”的思路來應對，即“物質層次”“心理層次”和“社會(hui) 層次”。

已經受過懲罰的人，為(wei) 什麽(me) 會(hui) 繼續犯罪呢？原因無非是三條：

1. 犯過罪的人，即使出了監獄，往往也找不到工作，於(yu) 是隻能重操舊業(ye) 。[物質原因]

2. 監獄往往用比較粗暴的方法對待罪犯，不僅(jin) 不能從(cong) 心理上解決(jue) 罪犯的問題，反而讓他們(men) 對社會(hui) 產(chan) 生報複的不良心理。[心理原因]

3. 犯過罪的人，往往難以得到社會(hui) 的認可，不被社會(hui) 容納，因此很容易讓他們(men) 重新走上犯罪的道路。[社會(hui) 原因]

解決(jue) 辦法：

1. 改進監獄的教育改造方法，讓罪犯從(cong) 心底裏重新熱愛社會(hui) ；

2. 正麵宣傳(chuan) 出獄的犯人，讓社會(hui) 接納他們(men) ，並為(wei) 他們(men) 創造就業(ye) 機會(hui) 。

高分範文

Research shows that globally more than 20% of criminals, the majority of whom are young adults, will revert to anti-social behaviour after being released from prison. There are, to my mind, three reasons why this happens.

Many criminals find they simply cannot find a job to support themselves after being freed from prison. Having been secluded from the real world for a long while, they find themselves no longer needed by the world that changes on a daily basis. Then, without a choice, they have to steal, rob, or even kill people, just for survival’s sake.

Another important reason has to do with the criminals’ experience in prison. Many criminals complain that they have received improper treatment while they are in prison. They are verbally abused, physically punished, and mentally despised. Consequently, when they go out of prison, what fills their heart is hatred, rather than love, for the world.

Finally, most former criminals are not really accepted by the general society of mankind. Having biased views on them, people always try to avoid them, not to mention making friends with them, leaving them isolated from the rest of the world. Then, just like the beast in Frankenstein, they easily get involved in anti-social behaviour of various kinds.

To prevent criminals from committing crimes again, the first and foremost thing that ought to be done is improving the quality and effectiveness of prison education which should be carried out with the aim to turning the prisoners into good people rather than victims of physical punishment. Then, perhaps more importantly, the general public should be made to understand that the former criminals also deserve the right of a good life. If the government and individuals alike tried their best to help the criminals by creating job opportunities for them and showing enough respect, I believe they would eventually come back to normal life and would not commit more crimes.

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