2月8日雅思小作文8分範文 動態柱狀圖 4個描述對象 如何分段寫作

柱狀圖

The bar chart shows the number of people who visited different museums in London. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

1、題目大意

柱狀圖顯示了參觀倫(lun) 敦不同博物館的人數。通過選擇和報告主要特征來總結信息，並在相關(guan) 情況下進行比較。

2、高分範文示例

開始段 - 改寫(xie) 題目+總結

The bar chart illustrates the number of visitors to four different types of museums in London from June to October. Overall, the British Museum attracted the highest number of visitors, while the National Museum had the lowest attendance during this period. Notably, the majority of visitors visited the museums in August.

第一段 - 描述前三個(ge) 月變化

In June and July, the monthly visitor numbers showed little variation across the four museums. The HistoryMuseum, British Museum, and Science Museum all had slightly over 400,000 visitors, while the National Museum had only about half that number, around 200,000. In August, there was a marked increase in the number of visitors to the History, British, and National Museums, reaching their peak numbers. The British Museum exceeded 700,000 visitors, while the HistoryMuseum had 600,000 and the National Museum saw 300,000.

第二段 - 描述後兩(liang) 個(ge) 月變化

In September, the Science Museum saw a notable rise in visitor numbers compared to the previous months, reaching a peak of around 500,000, while the attendance at the other three museums declined significantly. Finally, in October, the visitor numbers continued to decrease across all four museums. The HistoryMuseum, National Museum, and Science Museum all reached their lowest figures during the five-month period, with approximately 250,000, 180,000, and 300,000 visitors respectively.

柱狀圖必備語料

visitor numbers 遊客人數

attracted the highest number 吸引了最多的遊客

reached a peak 達到頂峰

saw a marked increase 看到明顯增加

showed little variation 變化不大

had slightly over 略高於(yu)

reached their lowest figures 達到最低數值

a notable rise 顯著上升

declined significantly 顯著下降

during this period 在此期間