雅思大作文7分範文及解析：保護野生動物的資源過多

觀點類大作文，環境類話題

Some people argue that too much attention and too many resources have been given to the protection of wild animals and birds. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

題目來源：2015年1月31日大陸雅思大作文

1、題目大意

有人認為(wei) 對保護野生動物和鳥類給予了太多的關(guan) 注和資源。你是否同意？

2、思路解析

這是一道觀點類大作文，聊的是野生動物保護的問題。話題比較常規，但是審題時注意“too much/many”這個(ge) 詞，我們(men) 在討論同意與(yu) 否時，並不隻是討論“是否保護野生動物”，而是“是否投入了太多資源”。下麵，月半鴨和大家一起來看下具體(ti) 觀點。

首先來看同意的角度，即投入保護的資源確實過多了。

人類自身有大量的問題需要解決(jue) ，特別是在那些貧困地區，饑餓、疾病等問題一直威脅當地人的生命。一方麵，人們(men) 在無法保障自身生命的前提下卻擔心野生動物的生存並不合理。另一方麵，如果將投入保護野生動物和鳥類的資源能夠用於(yu) 解決(jue) 那些貧困地區，可能能更好地改善當地人的生存條件和壽命。

其次來看反對的角度，即投入的資源並沒有過多。

一是許多野生動物瀕臨(lin) 滅絕確實是由於(yu) 人類造成的。人們(men) 為(wei) 了滿足自身的需求，過度開發土地、捕撈動物和魚類以及汙染自然環境，造成了野生動物及鳥類的死亡和滅絕。因此，人們(men) 有責任為(wei) 自己的行為(wei) 買(mai) 單，既然人類在過往的行為(wei) 中獲得了大量回報，那麽(me) 現在也應當提供更多資源來彌補自己造成的損失。

二是保護野生動物一定程度上就是保護人類自身的生存環境。許多野生動物在維持生態平衡中都扮演了重要角色，如果生態遭到破壞，人類將不得不麵臨(lin) 更加惡劣的生存情況。因此，出於(yu) 保護人類自身生存的需要，投入再多資源也不為(wei) 過

3、提綱

4、高分範文示例

It is true that millions of animals suffer and die needlessly each year, as unfortunately, they are the collateral victims of disasters and human activities. In this case, much emphasis and many resources are allocated in the attempts to preserve rare or dying species. However, some people have launched attacks on the expenditure on animal protection. Yet I personally believe that efforts made to protect the animal welfare is a compelling obligation of human beings especially when we are partially held responsible for the disappearance of animals and birds.

On one hand, we have to admit the fact that earth is a closed system and therefore, all of its life is interdependent relying upon each other as resources.  The more biologically diverse earth is the better the chance all species will have for survival, as obviously it ensures countless kinds of foods as well as raw materials for clothing, shelter, fertilizers and medicines all of which serve as the supporting pillar of the sustainable development of human society.

On the other, apart from natural disasters, some of the most common reasons that animals are extinct are caused by humans. They experience the terrible effects of disasters that people do: injury, starvation, thirst, displacement, illness and stress. For example, construction forces animals of all kinds to move to a different place and adapt to a place that they’re not used to. Pollution and contamination is also caused by humans. Most pollutants in the air can usually be ascribed to cars, trains, factories etc. Contamination is caused by humans throwing debris into rivers, ponds, canals, beaches and even oceans. Animal test are another cause we cannot neglect. These years animals are increasingly used to develop medical treatments, determine the toxicity of medications, check the safety of products destined for human use, and other biomedical, commercial, and health care uses. Therefore, we are not in the position to opt-out of the responsibility of protecting those endangered species.

In conclusion, I would say that we do need to be more aware of the protection of wild animals and birds and take action accordingly. Yet this does not necessarily mean that we should focus our resources solely on wild species. Other approaches like tightening restrictions on human activities which may result in devastating impacts on both the living species and environment we share may be more effective.

5、相關(guan) 詞匯和語法結構

Needlessly  不必要的 ; 不需要地

Collateral  抵押品 ; 抵押物 ; 擔保品

compelling obligation  強製義(yi) 務

displacement  取代 ; 移位 ; 替代

starvation  饑餓 ; 挨餓 ; 餓死

debris  殘骸 ; 碎片 ; 破片

toxicity  毒性 ; 毒力 ; 毒性作用

devastating  毀滅性的 ; 破壞性極大的