海外·8.9日托福寫作範文+分析| 飲食習慣

8月上旬國內(nei) 托福考試比較少所以我在網上搜集了海外場的考題供大家學習(xi) 因為(wei) 全球其實是一套題目國內(nei) 場和海外場會(hui) 相互重複👏🏻 也歡迎海外同學考試後回憶考題給我

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To continue our discussion of the health benefits of good nutrition, I’d like you to consider the broader topic of eating habits-not just what people eat and drink, but how often, how much, and when, Those who want to improve their health often begin by changing some kind of eating habit. This includes a wide range of behavior.What is one poor eating habit that would be important for most people to change, and why?Kelly:If people could start with one change to improve their eating habits, it would be to eat a better breakfast. Most people are so rushed in the morning that they don't take the time to sitdown and eat a balanced meal. A good breakfast gives youmore energy all day and keeps you from eating too much later on.Andrew:I think most people don't bother to learn much about the food that they eat. This ignorance is a kind of bad eating habit. lt can be burdensome, but you should try to read every foodpackage label. The more you can learn about what you're putting in your body, the more likely you'l be to make good decisions.

審題注意點

一.這道題重複了25年6月24日和24年6月30日的原題。關(guan) 注是eating habits 這個(ge) 很小的方麵，所以題目問得相當具體(ti) 了。

二. 審題注意點：

- ”one poor eating habit”是一個(ge) 飲食健康方麵的問題。要先列舉(ju) 這個(ge) poor habit, 且隻需要寫(xie) 1個(ge) 即可。

- “most people”最好是大部分人都容易出現的，比較主流一點的問題

- “important”要凸顯這種問題的嚴(yan) 重性 or 改掉這個(ge) 問題的好處。

三. 參考思路：這個(ge) 題目大部分同學想到的問題其實跟其他兩(liang) 位NPC同學想的都差不多，主要的poor eating habit 包括：不吃早飯。吃飯飲食營養(yang) 不均衡。喜歡吃零食垃圾食品：奶茶/高熱量快餐，喝酒。

飲食不規律：不按時吃飯，吃夜宵….這些壞的飲食習(xi) 慣都會(hui) 導致人們(men) 熱量超重，肥胖，高血脂，精力衰退，容易疲勞… …大家選擇一個(ge) 自己最好寫(xie) 的，準備充分的內(nei) 容進行寫(xie) 作即可。

參考範文:

I believe that one crucial change most people need to make is adopting a regular eating schedule.Nowadays, as people juggle various commitments, they often prioritize work, study, or other activities over regular meals, leading to unhealthy consequences. For instance, many individuals might skip breakfast to gain an extra ten minutes of sleep. During the day, they often delay lunch until they have completed a long company meeting or an urgent work assignment, or they might quickly grab a bite at a fast food restaurant, such as McDonald’s, to accommodate another client meeting. Consequently, by day’s end, exhausted and hungry individuals tend to overeat, indulging in excessive quantities of wine, meat, or fried foods. Such irregular eating habits explain the sharp increase issues like obesity, fatigue, stomach issues, and diabetes. The most straightforward and effective solution is adopting a regular eating schedule. It can help maintain good spirits, reduce cravings for high-calorie fast food, and improve overall health. Therefore, maintaining regular meal times is an important dietary habit that everyone should adopt for better health management.（176字）