雅思大作文7分範文及解析：國際援助解決水問題

雙邊類大作文，國際類話題

Some people think that international aid organization should help to get the clean water, but others think they should do more like build schools or help farming. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

題目來源：2022年8月20日亞(ya) 太雅思大作文

1、題目大意

有些人認為(wei) 國際援助組織應該幫助獲得清潔的水，但其他人認為(wei) 他們(men) 應該做更多的事情，如建造學校或幫助耕種。討論這雙方觀點並給出自己的看法。

2、思路解析

這是一道雙邊類大作文，聊的是國際組織應該解決(jue) 水資源還是援助學校或農(nong) 業(ye) 。雙邊類大作文，需要對每個(ge) 觀點分別表達同意或反對，最終的結論就是我的立場，可以是中立（雙方都同意或都反對），也可以是單邊支持某一方立場。審題時需要注意題目中雙方觀點明確提到“clean water”、“build schools or help farming”，在論證中需要提及並展開。下麵月半鴨和大家一起來看下具體(ti) 觀點。

首先來看前者觀點的合理性，有三方麵。

一是幹淨的水關(guan) 係到人們(men) 正常生活甚至生存，無論是日常飲用還是洗漱等方麵，都需要清水。

二是幹淨的水源有利於(yu) 人們(men) 的健康衛生，許多疾病比如痢疾會(hui) 通過汙水進行傳(chuan) 播，清水的使用能夠有效阻止這些病菌擴散。

三是當地農(nong) 業(ye) 和工業(ye) 等產(chan) 業(ye) 發展同樣離不開清水。農(nong) 田灌溉必須要用到清水才能保障農(nong) 作物健康生長，工業(ye) 方麵也需要用到大量清水才能保障生產(chan) 正常進行以及避免設備損壞。

然後來看後者觀點的合理性，有兩(liang) 方麵。

一方麵援建學校和發展農(nong) 業(ye) 確實有助於(yu) 當地長期發展，發展學校鼓勵教育能夠為(wei) 當地培養(yang) 人才投入到各個(ge) 領域建設。發展農(nong) 業(ye) 能夠產(chan) 出更多糧食，滿足當地人的食物需求，避免造成饑荒。

另一方麵有些地區本身並不缺乏水資源，但缺少足夠的技術支持來保障發展且依靠自身難以解決(jue) ，因此更加需要尋求國際組織的援助。

3、提綱

4、高分範文示例

There has been a discussion for years over whether international assistance agencies should prioritize clean water or more growth demands. Some individuals believe that clean water should be a top focus, but others say that other areas, such as assisting farmers in food production or constructing schools, should be given more attention. I personally agree with the first set of viewpoints.

Firstly, I believe we should prioritise assisting those in greatest need, including those who lack access to clean drinking water. Not only is clean drinking water essential for humans, but also for animals and plants. It is what we drink in the day to make our bodies function properly; it is what we use for bathing, cooking, and cleaning up after ourselves; and when there is no clean water available in your area, people are unable to live their lives to the fullest extent. And it is even more important for the ecosystem as well: clean water avoids the spread of diseases such as cholera and dysentery, which can be carried by dirty water and daily sewage.

In addition, it is vital to keep in mind that many people in poor nations lack access to healthcare and education due to an inherent lack of resources, such as money and land, and not because they do not want them or do not have specific skills. Even if we were able to offer everyone everything they require all at once, this would exclude a great number of individuals who require immediate assistance but lack the funds or time to pursue education or healthcare because they are trapped in daily survival, including such clean water usage.

In conclusion, clean water is essential for all human life and International assistance organizations are responsible for supplying clean water around the world, and they should do all that is necessary to ensure that all people have access to clean drinking water for the duration of their lives.

5、相關(guan) 詞匯和語法結構

top focus   焦點

prioritize   優(you) 先處理

function   v. 正常運轉

keep in mind   牢記

is essential for   對……至關(guan) 重要

 for the duration   在……整個(ge) 期間