雅思大作文7分範文及解析：媒體報道更多好消息

觀點類大作文，媒體(ti) 類話題

The media should include more stories which report good news. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

題目來源：2018年5月24日亞(ya) 太雅思大作文

1、題目大意

媒體(ti) 應該包括更多報道好消息。是否同意？

2、思路解析

這是一道觀點類大作文，聊的是媒體(ti) 是否應該報道更多積極內(nei) 容。題目讀起來不複雜，審題時注意兩(liang) 點，一是討論對象“media”，需要考慮其特性；二是觀點有比較關(guan) 係“more”，在論證中需要體(ti) 現。下麵，月半鴨和大家一起來看下具體(ti) 觀點。

首先來看同意的角度，有兩(liang) 方麵。

一是媒體(ti) 一定程度上影響了人們(men) 對於(yu) 周圍情況的認知，更多的正麵新聞能夠提高人們(men) 的信心和幸福感。當人們(men) 接收到更多正向的信息後，他們(men) 對於(yu) 生活會(hui) 更加樂(le) 觀，對周圍人也更容易產(chan) 生信任感。

二是減少負麵新聞包括犯罪新聞的比例能夠降低人們(men) 的焦慮和恐慌，同時還有望降低潛在的“模仿犯罪”行為(wei) 。

再來看反對角度，同樣有兩(liang) 點。

一是新聞媒體(ti) 應該遵循客觀公正的原則， 而不是被人為(wei) 操縱。無論是正麵還是負麵的內(nei) 容，新聞媒體(ti) 都應該客觀報道並展示大眾(zhong) 。

二是公眾(zhong) 有知情權，特別是當危機發生時，人們(men) 應當知道自己麵臨(lin) 的困難和處境，而不是被虛假的歌舞升平所包圍。

3、提綱

4、高分範文示例

The idea that the media should report on positive events more frequently has been brought forward by many individuals. Contrary to the opposing viewpoint, I hold a supportive position.

First and foremost, a greater proportion of encouraging media coverage can diminish the likelihood of "copycat” crimes and suicides. Constant crime cases, rather than events featuring good news, can occasionally give criminals a popularity and induce regular people to commit crimes they otherwise would not think of. Therefore, extensive and widely disseminated negative news reporting may result in a rise in crimes that are in similar manner. As a result, there is a pressing need for increased reporting that contains message of optimism due to the amplifying effect such messages have on the crime rate.

Even more importantly, sharing positive news boosts morale in the community. Undoubtedly, it is a credible reason that reports concerning crimes and accidents can remind people of the threats and so prevent them from being victimized. In contrast to how beautiful stories make people feel that they live in a society where justice, love, and equality are respected, this increases the likelihood that citizens will feel isolated from one another. In this manner, a strong faith in governments, authorities, and individuals in the surrounding area can be cultivated. For instance, more individuals might drop their guard against strangers and offer assistance, as opposed to regarding the difficulties of others as scams. Only with such faith can society remain functional and sustain a healthy way of life.

In conclusion, sufficient time and space should be reserved for positive news due to its positive impact on both the crime rate and social confidence.

5、相關(guan) 詞匯和語法結構

be brought forward   被提出

copycat   模仿犯罪

induce   誘導、誘使

In this manner   通過這種方式

a strong faith   堅定的信仰

be reserved  for   留作、供……使用