雅思大作文7分範文及解析：影響個人幸福的因素

雙邊類大作文，社會(hui) 類話題

Some people think personal happiness is directly related to economic success, while others believe this depends on other factors. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

題目來源：2012年10月11日大陸雅思大作文

1、題目大意

有些人認為(wei) 個(ge) 人幸福與(yu) 經濟成功直接相關(guan) ，而其他人則認為(wei) 這取決(jue) 於(yu) 其他因素。討論雙方的觀點並給出自己的觀點。

2、思路解析

這是一道雙邊類大作文，聊的是個(ge) 人幸福建立經濟成功還是其他要素上。雙邊討論類的題目，可以自由討論雙方各自的利弊，你可以同意某一方觀點也可以持中立（都同意或都反對）。審題時注意兩(liang) 點，一是討論主題對象是“個(ge) 人幸福”，需要圍繞這個(ge) 主題展開討論。二是兩(liang) 者觀點不矛盾，因此可以取中立觀點分類討論。下麵，月半鴨和大家一起來看下具體(ti) 觀點。

首先來看前者的合理性，有兩(liang) 方麵。

一是強有力的經濟基礎可以有效提升個(ge) 人生活質量。寬敞的住房、良好的教育、豐(feng) 富的物質基礎都能提升個(ge) 人的生活幸福感，而這些都需要花錢獲得，因此經濟成功可以讓人生活更幸福。

二是一個(ge) 人經濟成功後可能會(hui) 更加自信以及有成就感，同時其社會(hui) 地位也會(hui) 隨著經濟能力提升，更多人會(hui) 對其產(chan) 生尊重，這都有助於(yu) 整體(ti) 幸福感提升。

再來看後者觀點的合理性。

個(ge) 人幸福是一個(ge) 複雜而多方麵的概念，不能簡化為(wei) 經濟成功與(yu) 幸福之間的簡單關(guan) 係。家庭和睦、身體(ti) 健康、生活安逸等等都會(hui) 讓人感到幸福，比如對於(yu) 留守兒(er) 童或遊子來說，與(yu) 家人團聚的時光可能其最幸福的時候；對於(yu) 身患疾病的人來說，身體(ti) 康複是能讓其感到幸福的時刻。

3、提綱

4、高分範文示例

In contemporary culture, a person's economic standing has a major impact on his or her future. Some individuals believe that their pleasure is directly proportionate to their financial condition, but others argue that there are more elements that contribute to happiness. I personally think that different people may have varying concepts of happiness. Therefore, financial success is not the sole factor that defines personal success.

It is well acknowledged that a sound financial base is closely associated with a fulfilling existence. One explanation for this is that money secures the fulfilment of their material demands. With significant income comes access to resources like quality education, sophisticated facilities, and improved health care. In contrast, the poor can rarely afford to rent a house or vehicle, much less maintain a huge apartment or their own automobiles. In other words, their quality of life is uncertain, which undermines their sense of security and happiness. Additionally, wealth is frequently associated with recognition and social standing. People with high earnings are more likely to feel confident since they are perceived as accomplished, admirable individuals. And the psychological well-being that results from being appreciated promotes enjoyment as well.

However, for a substantial number of individuals, happiness extends beyond financial achievement. Physically handicapped individuals cite health as their primary source of bliss. Children left behind consider their relationship with their parents to be their most valuable possession. Medical personnel who are overburdened by intense emergencies believe that the compassion and understanding of their patients reward their efforts. Health, family, and social interactions are more important to these groups of people than sole wealth.

Overall, while financial success plays an important role in determining one's standard of living, there are other important factors that influence people's lives. I believe it is up to the individual's free will to define and pursue happiness.

5、相關(guan) 詞匯和語法結構

contributing factor   影響因素

material demands   物質需求

psychological satisfaction   心理上的滿足感

physical handicap   生理缺陷

play a pivotal role in   起關(guan) 鍵作用

uplift happiness   提升幸福感