今天，給大家帶來一個(ge) G類雅思寫(xie) 作範文。
題目：
In addition to your full-time job, you are taking a 15-hour Computer Science course. You now find that you cannot continue with the course.
Write a letter to the course tutor. In your letter:
- Describe your schedule and situation
- Explain why you cannot continue the course
- Say what action you would like to take
審題：
- Type: Semi-formal
- Key words: Describe the schedule and situation/explain why/next action would like
- Model Answer 高分範文-
Dear Mr. Reynolds,
I’m afraid I have some unfortunate news. Due to being over-extended at work, I find myself unable to meet the time demands of the course.
On Mondays in particular, as the distance of the school is some way from my place of work, and as I had over-estimated my capacity for navigating rush hour, Monday has proven to be a hindrance in my study effectiveness, and as my late arrival last Monday shows, an obstacle to arriving timely to class.
I know this is highly unorthodox, but I would like to inquire as to the possibility of only attending Wednesday’s class. Friday is also posing a problem for attending the class as my superior has shifted another task my way in the interim. For homework, perhaps I could check in with one of the students regarding the areas covered in class and the homework assigned.
As I said, I know this is a highly unusual request, and my apologies for having to ask you. If you consider this unworkable, I fully understand, and in that case, I’m afraid I must discontinue the course at present. You are a splendid teacher no doubt!
Thank you,
Stuart Goddard
- Essay Analysis 範文解析 -
Standard Phrases G類雅思高分句型:
- Dear _____,
- I’m afraid I have some unfortunate news.
- I find myself unable to meet the time demands of…
- my place of work
- I know this highly unorthodox, but I would like to inquire as to the possibility of
- As I said, I know this is a highly unusual request, and my apologies for having to ask you.
- , I fully understand,
- Thank you,
Vocabulary 高分地道詞匯和短語：
- is some way from 離……有點遠
- over-estimated 高估了
- my capacity for 能力
- rush hour 高峰期
- hindrance 阻礙
- effectiveness 效率
- obstacle 障礙
- unorthodox 非傳統的；不正規的
- the possibility of ……的可能性
- posing a problem 造成了一個問題
- superior 上司
- shifted____ my way 到我頭上
- in the interim 在這期間
- covered in class 課上涉及到的
- assigned 布置
- unworkable 行不通的
- discontinue 中斷
- splendid 出色的
- no doubt 毫無疑問
Coherence & Cohesion (C&C): 把這些簡單的詞用好，在"連貫與(yu) 銜接"方麵輕鬆拿分：
- Due to being
- , I
- On +day+ in particular,
- , as
- , and as I had
- has proven to be
- , and as
- shows
- , an
- timely
- only
- also
- another
- , perhaps I could
- regarding
- As I said,
- If you consider this
- , and in that case,
- at present
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