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The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annualincome in 2007,2011 and 2015.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, andmake comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

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1、題目大意

下圖顯示了2007年、2011年和2015年美國家庭年收入的數量。通過選擇和報告主要特征來總結信息，並在相關(guan) 地方進行比較。

2、高分範文示例

開頭段 - 改寫(xie) 題目

The bar chart delineates the variation in the number of American households categorized by their annual income for the years 2007, 2011, and 2015.

主體(ti) 段1 - 2007年數據

In the year 2007, the most populous category was that of households earning an annual income of $100,000 or more, with the count approximating 30 million. This was succeeded by the bracket of $25,000-$49,999, followed by households earning less than $25,000, then the $50,000-$74,999 group, and lastly, the $75,000-$99,999 bracket, which comprised around 15 million households.

主體(ti) 段2 - 2011年數據

A noteworthy redistribution was observed by 2011. The bracket of $25,000-$49,999 emerged as the most populous group, encompassing around 30 million households. Intriguingly, the category of $100,000 or more witnessed a decline to around 27 million, even falling beneath the less than $25,000 group. The $75,000-$99,999 bracket persistently remained the least populous group, with the number of households even experiencing a decrease compared to 2007.

主體(ti) 段3 - 2015年數據

By the year 2015, the category of $100,000 or more regained its position as the most populous group, with the count approximating 33 million households. Both the categories of less than $25,000 and $25,000-$49,999 witnessed a marginal decrease compared to 2011. The $75,000-$99,999 bracket consistently remained the least populous group, barely reaching the 15 million mark.

5、相關(guan) 詞匯和語法結構

delineates the variation in   描繪變化。

categorized by their annual income   根據年收入進行分類。

the most populous category   最多的類別。

with the count approximating   數量大約在。

A noteworthy redistribution   值得注意的重新分配。

emerged as the most populous group   成為(wei) 最大的群體(ti) 。

witnessed a decline   出現下降。

falling beneath   下降至……以下。

persistently remained   持續保持。

regained its position   重新獲得其位置。

witnessed a marginal decrease   出現了微小的減少。

barely reaching   勉強達到。