今天的題目是 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In the past, teachers had a greater influence on young people than they do today.
是2021年的時候特別喜歡考的一個(ge) 老題。
下麵是ChatGPT 給我的第一個(ge) 版本
最大的問題就是太短了，沒有細節。
所以接著問了一個(ge) 能不能展開到500字
下麵是第二個(ge) 版本的回複
It's important to note that the influence of teachers on young people can vary greatly depending on the specific circumstances and context. With that said, there are a few factors that may have contributed to a perceived decline in the influence of teachers in recent years.
One possible factor is the increasing availability of information and resources online. With the proliferation of the internet and social media, young people today have access to a vast amount of information and can connect with others from all around the world. This can potentially reduce the need for teachers as a source of information and guidance, as young people can find answers to their questions or get support from their peers online.
Another factor is the changing nature of education itself. In the past, education was often more traditional and structured, with a focus on memorization and rote learning. Today, education is often more interactive and student-centered, with a greater emphasis on critical thinking, problem-solving, and collaboration. This shift may have led to a change in the role of teachers, as they may be less likely to be seen as the sole authority on a subject and more as facilitators of learning.
Technology and social media may also play a role in the perceived decline of the influence of teachers. Many young people today are active users of technology and social media, and they may be more likely to seek out information and support from their peers or from online sources rather than from their teachers. Additionally, the constant stream of information and content on social media can be overwhelming, and young people may have a harder time distinguishing between reliable sources and misinformation. This can potentially reduce the perceived credibility and influence of teachers.
It's worth noting that these are just a few possible factors that may have contributed to a perceived decline in the influence of teachers. There are also many other factors that could potentially have an impact, such as changes in societal attitudes towards education and the role of teachers, the increasing demands on teachers and schools, and the impact of policies and funding on education.
Overall, while it is difficult to make a definitive statement about the relative influence of teachers in the past versus today, it is clear that teachers have always played a crucial role in the development and education of young people. Despite the challenges and changes they face, teachers continue to make a positive impact on the lives of their students and are an integral part of the education system.
整題回複了420+ 的字數，這個(ge) 樂(le) 觀說體(ti) 現出來了ChatGPT 還是在意內(nei) 容的完整性的，不會(hui) 死摳字數；但往cynical 想，如果在意內(nei) 容完整的話，也大可以超過500 這個(ge) 界限，至少我是不介意的。
撇開這個(ge) 字數要求不說，整體(ti) 文章結構，展開和語言都是不錯的。
結構上很規整，隻是如果是在乎critical thinking的考試或者任務來說，目前的這個(ge) 版本可能角度太為(wei) 單一了，畢竟中間展開隻是列舉(ju) 了幾個(ge) 平行的factors。
結構上好的地方是不管是全文還是單個(ge) 段落都是很好的總分結構。結構上可以挑剔的地方是最後一段不是對於(yu) 中間段內(nei) 容的直接總結，一般建議考試寫(xie) 作時候還是對應的直白點比較好。
展開上細節是可以更多的，比如
Technology and social media may also play a role in the perceived decline of the influence of teachers. Many young people today are active users of technology and social media, and they may be more likely to seek out information and support from their peers or from online sources rather than from their teachers. Additionally, the constant stream of information and content on social media can be overwhelming, and young people may have a harder time distinguishing between reliable sources and misinformation. This can potentially reduce the perceived credibility and influence of teachers.
上麵這個(ge) 段落的細節展開是藍色的兩(liang) 點，這兩(liang) 句點後麵都可以再加上2-3句的細節來具體(ti) 說下，比如第一點的後麵可以說下young people 現在是如何用online sources 的，導致老師的influence 下降；第二句的後麵同理。
展開上更為(wei) 不理想的是倒數第二段
It's worth noting that these are just a few possible factors that may have contributed to a perceived decline in the influence of teachers. There are also many other factors that could potentially have an impact, such as changes in societal attitudes towards education and the role of teachers, the increasing demands on teachers and schools, and the impact of policies and funding on education.
這個(ge) 段落就成了單純的羅列點了，細節的證明都不見了。
從(cong) 語言表達的角度來說，這是一篇很好的文章，流暢、清晰和表達豐(feng) 富度都很好。
Overall，從(cong) 備考角度來說，ChatGPT，這個(ge) 目前在文字交互上最被讚譽的chatbot 可以供我們(men) 學習(xi) 的
1. 構思（在有些想不到點的話題上，雖然ChatGPT也不能給我們(men) 太多細節，但是至少能給好多個(ge) 思考的方向）
2. 語言表達
綜上，外界的都是輔助，提高寫(xie) 作最好的方式還是多寫(xie) 。
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