【真題示範】雅思寫作邏輯鏈—高分必備（下）

上期我們(men) 跟著機構老師寫(xie) 作真題示範，教你如何正反態度“兩(liang) 手抓”！讓雅思作文看起來更有邏輯更有針對性，麵對一個(ge) 話題時如何表達兩(liang) 種對立態度更加流暢合理！破解了邏輯鏈後，本期我們(men) 一起看看如何將句子更絲(si) 滑地串聯在一起成為(wei) 一篇高質量的文章~

學會(hui) 用邏輯鏈把一篇作文的所有觀點以及觀點的論證都串起來了，接下來一起看看在理順邏輯之後，如何將各個(ge) 句子更好地連接起來吧！

Admittedly, technological development has positive influences on society. Firstly, it has freed people from tedious and onerous labor work, which is attributed to the mechanization of industry and agriculture. For example, in modern car factories, robots have substituted for human workers to do tasks such as welding car bodies and screwing bolts. Secondly, technological advances in many fields, including medicine, transportation, and telecommunication, have also provided people with a more enjoyable life and are of vital significance to a country’s progress. It is undoubtful that the criteria viewing whether a country is strong or not, except for economy, is technology. Take America, a country that became one of the most powerful nations because of the Technological Revolution.

句子解析

which is attributed to：是一個(ge) 非限定從(cong) ，要表達因為(wei) 什麽(me) /歸因於(yu) 什麽(me) ，可以用be attributed to科技發展我們(men) 在這段第一句就已經用過了，所以不妨可以用表達technological advances 科技進步。

including：放在文中其實也可以表達such as，雖然他們(men) 的中文意思不同，但也算是一種同義(yi) 替代噢。

be of significance= be significant 同樣地，當我們(men) 要表達be important時，也可以用be of importance

country’s progress：想要去避免development的重複使用，但又想表達“國家發展”，也不妨可以用上相近意思的country’s progress國家進程

take sth：take sth的用法可以表達為(wei) “以…為(wei) 例”是一個(ge) 很好的去替代“for example”的表達

However, technology has caused problems in people’s careers and daily lives. For one thing, it sets a barrier for people to get employed since workers should be more qualified to meet the requirements for employment. In the past, for instance, literate candidates might be hired as clerks or receptionists, whereas now these positions may require computer skills. For another thing, new forms of crimes, like online fraud, privacy intrusion, and copyright infringement, have been bred. There is still a consideration, which is that if immature technology is applied in real life, it will trigger tragedies, whether it be accidents or disasters. After all, numerous news reports of low-quality batteries causing explosions and even fires, when charged, have seen such an opinion be proven.

句子解析

for one thing … for another thing：可以去避免重複使用firstly / secondly，以及如果還有觀點的話，也可以用上there is still a consideration, which is that …或者another consideration in the case is that ….

trigger：這個(ge) 單詞本來是指槍的扳機，用作動詞的時候可以表達“引起”“導致”，去替代cause，當然cause的同義(yi) 替代還有很多，比如give rise to 或者render等。

whether A or B ：一種虛擬語氣，表示“無論是A還是B”

以上舉(ju) 例的句式結構、用語等都可以記下來替換在自己的文章中，豐(feng) 富自己的語言表達~