劍17高分寫作範文及解析：Test1 承擔風險的利弊

情報圈的第538篇寫(xie) 作範文解析

利弊類大作文，社會(hui) 類話題

It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

題目來源：劍17Test1大作文1

題目大意

人們(men) 承擔風險是很重要的，無論是在他們(men) 的職業(ye) 生涯還是個(ge) 人生活中。你認為(wei) 承擔風險的好處多於(yu) 壞處嗎？

思路解析

這是一道利弊類大作文，討論的是承擔風險的利弊問題。利弊類文章需要強調在論證上體(ti) 現合理性，即在具體(ti) 的分析中，明確能體(ti) 現出一邊的論述的確是大於(yu) 另一邊，或是利弊均等，而利弊是否有說服力並不取決(jue) 於(yu) 觀點的數量，而是內(nei) 容是否有說服力。審題的時候要注意，題目提到了“professional lives”和“personal lives”，因此兩(liang) 者都需要提及。很多同學可能覺得“承擔風險”這個(ge) 點比較抽象不好寫(xie) ，建議可以落到“物質”和“精神”兩(liang) 個(ge) 層麵進行討論，下麵月半鴨和大家一起來看下具體(ti) 觀點。

首先來看承擔風險的壞處。

職業(ye) 生涯角度來說，人們(men) 會(hui) 麵臨(lin) 財產(chan) 損失的風險。當人們(men) 拿出存款或者借款進行創業(ye) 和投資時，判斷失誤、工作疏忽或是一些外部不利條件的發生都可能會(hui) 使得人們(men) 賠掉本金甚至是陷入負債(zhai) 的境地，造成當事人經濟上的損失。

個(ge) 人生活角度來看，可能會(hui) 麵臨(lin) 健康的風險。比如，喜歡極限運動或旅遊探險的人，可能會(hui) 遇到摔傷(shang) 、骨折等等問題，這些都會(hui) 給當事人造成極大的痛苦和不便。

此外，失敗的風險還會(hui) 加重個(ge) 人負擔，無論是對於(yu) 失敗的恐懼還是失敗後的挫敗感，都會(hui) 給當事人造成精神上的負擔，不利於(yu) 其身心健康。

然後來看承擔風險的好處。

雖然成功和收益往往都會(hui) 伴隨著風險，但是一旦獲得成功往往能帶來豐(feng) 富的物質回報或精神回報。比如投資成功能夠賺取豐(feng) 厚的利潤，野外徒步旅行能夠看到獨特的風景，這些都是非常誘人的，而對於(yu) 不願承擔風險的人來說很難收獲到同樣的回報。此外，人們(men) 在應對風險和規避風險的過程中，能夠鍛煉規劃能力、隨機應變能力等，即使結果不盡人如意，但是過程依然能夠讓當事人的能力得到提升。

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高分範文示例

In both professional and personal lives, there is significant value attached to making risky decisions. From my point of view, the benefits of taking risks outweigh its drawbacks as being adventurous is a necessary component of advancement and growth.

To begin with, running the risk is conducive to helping people advance their careers. It is understandable that there are many people who are inclined towards risk-avoidance and determine early on that they are satisfied with their job position, which may result in the possibility that they are unable to unleash their full potential. In contrast, those adventurous people are more likely to achieve great success in their professional lives. This is because making multiple attempts in different enterprises and switching between industries tend to increase the likelihood of finding a good match. In addition, as for personal lives, risk-taking enables people to gain insights that are not available to them on a daily basis, thus obtaining a strong sense of achievement.

It is undeniable that making a risky move comes with certain disadvantages. To be specific, switching jobs is likely to result in significant declines in income, which may exert heavy financial burdens on those ambitious individuals. Moreover, it might end up with psychological frustration as those who engage in risky behaviours may feel depressed and disappointed after encountering failure at the very beginning. However, these setbacks are supposed to be temporary and should not be regarded as major drawbacks throughout a person’s life as risk-taking is doomed to bring about significant long-term benefits. Furthermore, such concerns can be addressed by avoiding recklessness in making decisions, which could help lessen the negative effects of taking risks.

In conclusion, although taking risks may have disadvantages, these downsides can be mitigated so that they are greatly outweighed by the advantages that help people learn and grow.

相關(guan) 詞匯和語法結構

financial outlays  財務支出

initial capital   原始資本

loan  貸款

extreme sports  極限運動

psychological frustration  心理挫敗感

investment failure  投資失敗

bankruptcy  破產(chan)

a sense of achievement and excitement  成就感和興(xing) 奮感

life-changing opportunities  改變人生的機遇