雅思大作文7分範文及解析：鄉村更有利於孩子成長

觀點類大作文，教育類話題

Nowadays, some people think the city is no longer a good place for children, they suggest that the country is a better choice. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

1、題目大意

如今，有些人認為(wei) 城市不再是適合孩子們(men) 的好地方，他們(men) 建議鄉(xiang) 村是更好的選擇. 你是否同意？

2、思路解析

這是一道觀點類大作文，城市和鄉(xiang) 村哪個(ge) 更適合孩子。題目理解上不難，審題時注意三個(ge) 點，一是“good place”並沒有給出明確定義(yi) ，因此在討論中可以給出明確解釋；二是題目包含了比較關(guan) 係，需要討論“city”和“country”哪個(ge) 更好，而不是單純討論各自好處；三是限定對象“children”，隻討論針對孩子的影響，無需討論成年人等情況。下麵月半鴨和大家一起來看下具體(ti) 觀點。

首先來看農(nong) 村更好的原因，有兩(liang) 方麵。

一是農(nong) 村相較於(yu) 城市環境汙染更少。現代城市中由於(yu) 人口及車輛過多、綠化太少，往往伴隨著空氣汙染和噪音汙染，這些不利於(yu) 孩子的健康成長，而鄉(xiang) 村則擁有更好的空氣質量，對於(yu) 孩子的健康會(hui) 更好。

二是農(nong) 村擁有更好的自然環境。孩子在農(nong) 村更有機會(hui) 接觸農(nong) 作物、各種花草樹木以及動物，他們(men) 能直觀的了解大自然，感受大自然與(yu) 人之間的關(guan) 係。這種體(ti) 驗和機會(hui) 在城市中是很難獲得的。

然後來看城市所具備的優(you) 勢，有三方麵。

一是城市擁有更好的教育資源。相較於(yu) 農(nong) 村而言，大城市往往擁有更好的學校、更優(you) 秀的老師以及教學相關(guan) 的配套設施，這些能幫助孩子更好地學習(xi) 以及掌握更多的知識內(nei) 容。即使孩子想要學習(xi) 藝術等領域，在城市中也更容易找到合適的老師。

二是城市擁有更完善的基礎設施，包括科技館、博物館、水族館等等。這些場所能豐(feng) 富孩子的課餘(yu) 生活、提升孩子在不同領域的見識、培養(yang) 孩子的人文素養(yang) ，如果在鄉(xiang) 村這樣的機會(hui) 會(hui) 少很多。

三是孩子在城市中可能擁有更多的發展機會(hui) ，鑒於(yu) 城市相較於(yu) 農(nong) 村往往擁有更多的教育、基礎建設、科技、資本等優(you) 勢，這意味著孩子在城市中生活會(hui) 擁有更多的外部優(you) 勢，這些優(you) 勢使得他們(men) 在成長的過程中有更多的選擇機會(hui) ，進而累積成一種發展優(you) 勢。

3、提綱

4、高分範文示例

The issue of child growth, especially in their living surroundings has drawn public attention, with one view stating that the countryside is a more suitable place for them than the city. However, I have an opposing view.

From education perspective, urban schools own advanced facilities which are regarded as one of the most significant factors to elementary education. Compared with rural classrooms, urban ones are equipped with multimedia, such as projectors, computers, etc., helping pupils acquire knowledge vividly and effectively. Besides, other facilities, including music rooms and libraries provide extra-course knowledge to those who have keen interest in these. On the contrary, those especially from remote areas have less access to related knowledge, preventing them from future success.

In addition, children in cities have more opportunities to visit museums and art galleries, widening their horizons and enriching social knowledge. National History Museum can offer an overview of the whole country, which means that children can learn abundant knowledge about this. Besides, artists’ paintings hanging in art galleries stimulate children’s imagination and interest in painting. In contrast, lack of social resources becomes a barrier to rural children’s development.

Granted, the benefits from the natural environment in countryside could not be denied. Unlike cities, there is less air, water or noise pollution in countryside. However, joint efforts are being made by both citizens and authorities to improve urban living environment, which narrows the gap between the two areas.

In conclusion, although children can live in the natural environment in countryside, high-qualified teaching facilities and rich social resources both guide them into future success.

範文作者：CB

5、相關(guan) 詞匯和語法結構

projector  投影儀(yi)

Art gallery  藝術畫廊

high-qualified  高質量的