雅思大作文7分範文及解析：教導父母減少青少年犯罪

觀點類大作文，犯罪類話題

The best way to reduce the crimes by young people is to educate their parents with . To what extent do you agree or disagree?

題目來源：2017年9月30日亞(ya) 太雅思大作文

1、題目大意

減少青少年犯罪的最好辦法是教導父母提高他們(men) 的家長技能，是否同意？

2、思路解析

這是一道觀點類大作文，聊得是減少青少年犯罪的最好辦法。審題時要注意兩(liang) 點，一是限定對象“reduce the crimes by young people”，討論的範圍限定在減少青少年犯罪上，不涉及別的犯罪類型。二是絕對詞“The best way”，一般遇到絕對化表達都是持反對觀點。下麵，月半鴨和大家一起來看下具體(ti) 觀點。

首先來看提高父母教育技能的合理性。

一是確實有部分青少年是因為(wei) 缺少父母的管教，在放任的情況下做出錯誤的行為(wei) 甚至違反法律犯規。

二是具備教育技能的家長能夠更好地和孩子溝通，為(wei) 孩子創造一個(ge) 更好的生長環境，培養(yang) 他們(men) 樹立正確的價(jia) 值觀和辨別是非的能力，減少孩子犯罪的可能性。

再來看反對角度，即隻關(guan) 注家長教育並不能解決(jue) 問題的原因，有三方麵。

一是同齡人的影響，青少年通常與(yu) 同齡人相處的時間更多並且容易受到朋友的行為(wei) 和態度的影響。如果朋友參與(yu) 犯罪活動，那導致當事人也跟著做的可能性會(hui) 增加。

二是社會(hui) 因素，諸如貧困、教育不足和機會(hui) 缺乏等社會(hui) 問題都可能導致青少年犯罪風險增加。生活貧困的人可能難以獲得良好的教育和工作機會(hui) ，進而采用非法手段來滿足他們(men) 的需求。

三是媒體(ti) 的誤導，年輕人由於(yu) 自控力和辨別能力較弱，可能會(hui) 模仿媒體(ti) 或影視作品中的暴力犯罪內(nei) 容，如果不加以管控同樣會(hui) 增加犯罪的風險。

3、提綱

4、高分範文示例

Some people believe there is a connection between crime and the uneducated parents. The majority of crimes committed by young people with ethnic background attach on the lack of parental skills. However, I disagree with the notion.

There are reasons why people consider training parents with parental skills as the best option to reduce juvenile delinquency. First and foremost, it helps to prevent children from falling into a life of crime and allows them to grow up in a healthy environment. Secondly, it allows parents to be more involved in the lives of their children by giving them the tools necessary for success. For example, if a child has a lack of confidence in school, this can lead to poor grades and low self-esteem. If this continues over time, it may cause them to become withdrawn from society or even turn towards crime.

However, rebellious adolescents frequently turn on those closest to them, typically their parents. In order to reduce the number of juvenile delinquents, it is necessary to take further, equally constructive action. Restricting violent content on traditional and social media would be an effective solution. As young and poorly educated individuals have a propensity to imitate whatever they are exposed to, protecting children from violent content would be beneficial. In particular, schools and educators should modify their methods of educating children. In addition to scientific training, there should be a greater emphasis on social skills and moral education. Furthermore, teachers should encourage ethical conduct and discourage aggressive and inappropriate behaviour.

In conclusion, educating parents with parenting skills is essential for minimising juvenile delinquency; nevertheless, other solutions to this problem should also be evaluated.

5、相關(guan) 詞匯和語法結構

juvenile delinquency 青少年犯罪

intimate connections 親(qin) 密關(guan) 係

rebellious adolescents   叛逆的青少年

sexual curiosesity 性好奇

violent content 暴力內(nei) 容

moral lessons 道德教育

ethical conduct   道德行為(wei)