雅思大作文範文-禁止危險運動

2022年8月27日

Some people think that the government should ban dangerous sports, but others think that people should have freedom to do whatever sport activities they choose. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

題幹信息的同義(yi) 替換：

1) dangerous sports

→hazardoussports

→dangerousphysical activities

2) ban

→prohibit

→stop people from (doing sth.)‍‍‍‍‍‍

視頻講解：

文本額外補充了做危險運動的好處：‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍

1) pursuit of glory or honor追求光榮和榮耀

2) development of courage

提升勇氣

3) an outlet for risk-taking impulses

發泄冒險的衝(chong) 動

4) much better than safe sports at revealing us to an important fact that we are mortal and this might lead to living more fully and meaningfully

比安全的運動更能揭露我們(men) 並不永生的事實，讓我們(men) 更充實更有意義(yi) 地生活

5) a therapy that cures people of trauma, especially those who have trouble getting back to a normal life after losing their loved ones.

治愈有創傷(shang) 的人，尤其是失去親(qin) 人，難以回到正常生活的人

補充的1) - 4)來自下邊的論文：https://www.researchgate.net/publication/273773412_Justification_of_Dangerous_Sports_and_the_Question_of_Values

下邊參考範文中，第二段舉(ju) 例騎牛和拳擊，是背素材直接用的。

更多危險運動和損傷(shang) ，見：危險運動和損傷(shang) 英文素材‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍開頭段：引入話題（適用於(yu) 雙邊討論題型）+給出觀點

There is a heated debate over whether hazardoussports should be prohibited.

In my judgement, it is unwiseto stop people from taking up these sports.‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍

主體(ti) 段1：討論題幹觀點1（讓步+反駁）

Prohibition may seemwise becauseconsequences of doing these dangerous activities can be severe. For example, neck and head injuries, along with bonefractures, are common in bull-riding; boxers are prone to developing neural problems later in their life, like Parkinson’s disease. However, they are significantlyless likely to happen to the fittest players than who are physically poorly prepared. So itmay be advisableto exclude only those without tough bodies.Besides, such sports come with considerable economic benefits, as participants need spend a large sum buying equipment and hiringa coach andtheir sportvideos posted onlinemight be a source of income.

主體(ti) 段2：討論題幹觀點2

I am for those who believe that individuals should be free to take up dangerous sports for two main reasons. Most importantly, some are born with the gene to experience thrills. They have no fear for high speed orheight, and even enjoy being in situations that others consider risky. I think they deserve to fulfill their desire to explore their lives in spite ofthe risks.In addition, these activities are much better than safe sports at revealing humans to an important fact that they are mortal and this might lead to living more fully and meaningfully.

結尾段：重申觀點‍‍‍

To conclude, despite diseases, disabilities and deaths resulting from playing hazardous sports,the economic and psychologicalbenefits justify support for these activities, as long as the prospective athletes pass a physical fitness test related to a specific sport.‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍

黑體(ti) 部分都是模板，其他部分則是填入模板的答題內(nei) 容。藍色下劃線部分是銜接。